|Reviews for What Matters Most|
| Bree chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
I completely agree with the first reviewer - got a little confusing at times and pretty much everything was already established (I.e. Snow and lightning being a couple(?), serah moving on, etc). However I'm really intrigued and want to read more! I really want to know want happened. Interesting fic so far, it's a real shame you posted it years ago and probably abandoned/forgot [about] it.
But omg, your fix is literally THE very FIRST fic I've read where lightning severely dislikes search and warns nothing to do with her only blood-relative...YESSSS! Lol, sounds harsh but honestly I never liked serah at all and if she's our of the picture, snow and lightning can freely be together. Which is exactly what's happened in your fic :)
| Renascielle chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
This is good. You should totally continue it.
One thing though, at times I was kind of asking myself what had just happened. It went too fast. Maybe a bit more description here and there, you know ?