I dont like agent wheeler (or whatever her real name is)...

And hmm... So eli beat ziva as a kid? That is something i feel is very likely as well, but probably wouldn't be on the real ncis, just like ziva getting out of somalia seemingly without anything having happened to her... (stupid writers)

why do i keep having a feeling that at least one of our hated daddies have something to do with this?

Anyways, UPDATE :)

good chapter, cant wait to see what comes next

Reeally loving this. Especially love all the Ziva/Tali and Tony/Tali interaction, but I would like to get to know David a little better too. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Really enjoyed this chatper with the focus on tali, can't wait to read the next one with tony

I first thought the beginning with McGee and Agent Wheeler was funny and cute. Then I thought, was she the ex calling the bad guys? Not so cute.

Very realistic portrayal of a three year old. I continue to be impressed by how you give a detailed view of Ziva's life. Very well written chapter as always. I am really looking forward to Tony being home.

Love Love Love Love. So excited for Tony to come home!

Little correction though: Motive not motif. Not a big deal.

Your Tali is so well written that despite what just happened with the computer, she's not annoying or spoiled. You are such a talented writer that brought to life a sweet, normal, inquisitive kid I could easily see running around my home. Good chapter. I'm looking forward to Tony and Ziva reunion, and in the future, Ziva waking up from the comma. Thank you for sharing.

Ahhhhh I can't wait for Tony to get back!

Update. Really. Really. Really. Soon.

Great chapter!

I'm loving Gibbs more and more. And I have a great respect for Ziva's ability to raise two kids on her own. I understand Tony's motivation in accepting the job, but sometimes you have to prioritize your life and he made the wrong choice. Job should never come before family.

Aw love David's story! Can't wait 4 Tony's return!

good chapter

I looooved it!

It was great to see some gibbs interaction... And the way ziva doesnt want to burden anyone with her kids / problems is just so in character!

As weird as it may sound, im not looking forward to the tivs reunion, because this story is so well written with ziva as a 'single mom', that i dont want it to change :)

ooh, and have i mentioned i love all the subtle hints? Like memories, uterus scar tissue (whats up with that, anyways? Likely somalia or mossad past, but what can have caused it?) etc

now, UPDATE! :D

the ziva-david moments are sooo adorable!

ahh give us more and more :D I love David and Ziva scenes but would also love to see more Tony scenes even if flashbacks