Reviews for Now a' is done |
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![]() ![]() enjoyed it very much-thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, nobody (especially not me) cares about whether or not Tiva and McAbby get their happily ever afters. Oh, except for the fact that I DO care ;) Awesome ending! Great way of breaking the fourth wall there at the end without actually breaking it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHA! What a comical, light-hearted way to end such a powerful story! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a great journey. I loved every bit of it, including how you kept Tony, Ziva and the rest of the team spot on character. And where do I start with your original characters? They are alive! I'm sorry it's over, but I'm glad it happened. Thank you for sharing and hope you continue posting. |
![]() ![]() Awww... I loved it, sweet epilogue for a great story. Thank you for sharing this story with us. :) (And if you one day decide to write a sequel, it would be great) |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for this wonderful ride! I do hope that the muse inspires you to a sequel :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story very much and will miss it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end? Oh no! LOL What a wonderful journey that was, though - through suspense and pain and laughter and happiness. Great writing and characterization all the way. Thanks so much for this lovely story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It took me three days to read this story (with plenty of Facebook and Tumblr in between) and it was three days well spent. I love how you portrayed the characters. The skipping between before and after Ziva's accident was great too. The case was awesome. Just lovely. I will subscribe for the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While i absolutely hate that you're ending the story, tou should know that is has definitely been one of my faves :D now i hope we're gonna be seeing a nice biiiig scene with the kids in the last chap ( wouldnt mind if it was ziva only - simply because the dynamic between 'single mom' ziva and the kids was so great), maybe trying to help THEM through what happened as well... Besides from that, loved how the last few chaps jumped back and forth in time! :D |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Loved how everything came together in the end. Now can't wait for the epilogue :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good end. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() I LOVED the technique you used in this chapter of going back and forth between past and present. Really well done. I can't wait to see what you mean by the epilogue being packed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for your explanation, makes perfect sense. WOWZA! EPIC! It's like a real episode and wowza. blew my mind! Seriously, I'm almost speechless. The cut-away scenes were awesome, how the past and present weaved together. Reminded me of Truth or Circumstances. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya know what would be really funny? Not that it has to happen, but what would be amusing...if after Abby & Tim adopt Liora (STILL LOVE that name, my name!), they find out Abby is pregnant. That would just take the cake. :)))) |