My favorite part, hands down:

"You sent a father to kill my kids, bastard!"

I can actually see this scene in my head. Like a mental movie. So well written. So completely true to character. And so very, very powerful.

Excellent job! :)

Nooooooooooooooooo! Tonnyyyyyyyyyyy! McGeeeeee! ah, that was good. Especially the interrogation scene, with Tony finally realizing Ziva shot Ari. I wonder how will react. And Ziva, finally moving on from Tali's death.

Can't wait to see it. Or read it :) Please, update soon and thanks a lot for your effort and dedication.

Interesting chapter. Loved how the interrogation went :)

Everything's finally coming together. Keep going! Can't wait for the last chapter :)

I think it's been a while since I reviewed. Sorry about that. But I love love love love love this story! I love all this unburying you do.

Question (and this may have been adressed but I skip the notes sometimes *sheepish*): Near the beginning it was stated that Tony and Ziva weren't married and didn't really believe in that sort of thing. Anyway, lately they've been referred to as husband and wife. Is that just a convenience thing? Or have you changed your mind? It doesn't really matter at all, it's just somethign I couldn't help but notice.

Absolutely not! You can't leave it like this! PLEASE update soon. This is really good btw.

OH. MY. GOODNESS. what a cliffhanger! update, update, update!

What? No no no, you can't leave it like this... please update soon.

That was the most insane cliffie I've ever read. Nice job. But, you're killing me!

No... no... NO! OMFG! You are so evil! Gibbs, Tim, Tony! NO!

Please don't let any of them die, please! UPDATE SOON!

okay, I'm getting in really late into this story. It took me long to read all the chapters but not in a bad like "O my god let the story end" kind of way but more in a "I could read chapters that are twice as long as this one and still not be bored" so as you can hopefully read I really like your story, and I hope on a very very happy ending.

I've said it before and i'll say it again... I DONT want it to end! :(

besides from that, loved the bedroom scene :) it's funny cause thats the reason ive always suspected ziva going after saleem as well! :)

Great chapter.

Great story so far. Exciting, intelligent and deeply emotional. You're a very tallented writer. Hope you're hooked into this fandom and continue to write us a some more stories. Thank you :)

I dunno...Wheeler caving, OK; that was expected. But Niv going to get Ziva with an unloaded gun? Surrendering to arrest so easily? That came as quite a shock. Is their apartment booby-trapped to implode at a later date, or something?