Reviews for Lingering
xvcx chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
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Alhendra chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Painful and beautiful. Lovely.
trzecipromien chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Very nice story. Still I wish Eames didn't give up on Arthur ;)
A chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
oh eames..
Spiders Wearing Tiny Hats chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Ooh, I really liked this! Writing Eames as a more emotional person was a very interesting choice, and a good one. I liked that you delved deeper beyond his surface of craftiness and mischievousness. Your writing style is good, and your syntax was fine besides for a stray period in the second to last paragraph. Also, after a semi-colon, the next word doesn't have to be capitalized. I think if you added some more clauses and participles to your writing, your style would improve. Still, this was very enjoyable and you caught Eames' emotion rather well. Good work. :D
f u h a u petals chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
This is such a little heartbreaker !

I love it all the same though!

Great job.
cowsquashmelon chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Love this. The two of them bickered far too much not to love each other.