|Reviews for The Gatekeeper|
| Catmint chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Beautifully tender. You've handled a delicate subject really well, so compassionately. Excellent writing.
| mon-petit-pois chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Beautiful oneshot:) this so should have happened in the show
| I am the girl in the corner chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
this was great, i loved it. brilliant work. :D :D :D :D :D
| stephlovespie chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
Absolutely loved this.
| stephlovespie chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
| BisleyD chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
I really like your style; I could've kept reading on and on. Especially great is Gibbs' angle to see and to comment on the topic, although I LOVE love LOVE the Tony&Ziva-interaction here too. It's...tough but safe. Unf.
Keep going, great work!
| browneyesonly4 chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
Aw...poor Ziva. Well done. All of it. Your word usage is fabulous :)
| day dream girl 63 chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
This is the first review I have given on this site, so please bear with me.
There is something so touching about this story, so real that I'm not sure you can add anything to it. But I also know that I would love to read more - although the story would need to continue at the same 'gentle' [if that's the right word!] pace until it reached another natural end. I suspect that could take a while- at least another six chapters - or that could be me being greedy.
Thank you for writing this.
| RavennaNightwind chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Wow. Just wow. That was intense. In a good way. Fantastic job.
| Jean89 chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Gorrrrgeous! I think I've reviewed 3 of your stories today kit, but I love them! You are such a good writter :)
| LadyTrish chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
I really liked the story...the ending was very touching and thank you for posting it. all the best
| LittleCatt chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
This was such an excellent story. I really like the way you talk about Tony learning to be around her again. When he asks if he can touch her, it shows how much he knows and how he's come to be a monumental presence at helping her through it. Much more so than he thinks he is.
I very much hope you write an additional chapter dealing with McGee's comment to Ziva. I'd love to see Tony fly off the handle at Tim for that one and go into Ziva-protection mode.
| Megwolf13 chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
I like it!
| petuniatc chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
Very good - this brings the story to closure of a sort. Often the show side steps all the things Ziva has done and seen in her lifetime. This put the focus on what Ziva had been thru and how much Tony (and Gibbs) understand.
Plus how clueless McGee is - Kate often filled that role before she died. Gibbs and Tony and Ziva have had a rougher rode in life while McGee seems to have had a normal life.
| NCISAddict87 chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
The chapter was great, but I particurally loved the ending. ]