|Reviews for Undisclosed Desires|
| chanur chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
| sherry williams chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
| shiftyless chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
| SammiW chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
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| slc6548 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Aw that was really sweet! Great job.
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
This is so sweet!
| frlarsson chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Loved the story, ) the fluffy smut and the lovely HEA,
best wishes, Linda
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
OK I think Bella is a bit of a "prick teaser" now I know Carlisle is married and she should have let him be just because of that but she teased him and led him on only to leave him right in the bed?
I love Jasper and I can't imagine anyone else if Jasper is in the house or even the neighborhood. duh
I loved this and I hope you go on with it.
| Fairy Forsaken chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Had me hooked on the start! :P
| Robin.D chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
that was good :):):):D
| NatalieLynn chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Bella's not exactly the brightest bulb in the box in this story, is she? First she's lusting after the sexy but smarmy Dr. Carlisle, a philandering husband who's obviously only looking for a fuck. I mean seriously, no semi-decent man would answer the door when a woman who knows he's married arrives to meet for their first date wearing naught but a pair a pyjama pants then proceed to kiss her and pick her up and csrry her to bed. Kind of presumptuous on his part, and more than kind of stupid on her part.
Then there's Jasper, the best friend she lives with that's been in love with her for over five years and she doesn't see it even though she says to herself she'd snatch him up in an instant if she wasn't gaga for the married doctor. Doesn't the fact that she says that imply that she knows at some level that he loves her? After all, how could she snap him up unless he was willing to be snapped up.
Oh well, there are none so blind as they who will not see or hwever that saying goes. Bella should be thankful that Jasper's a patient man. He's a smart one too. Smart enough to see that Carlisle's targeted Bella, and smart enough to push Bella's buttons and rouse her jealousy by dating another woman at just the right time. Smartest of all, he knew when it was time to lay his cards on the table and tell Bella the truth about how he felt about her. Great one shot!
| TinksVamps chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
This is a lovely little one shot. Carlisle is great as the sexy, but somewhat slimy doctor and Jasper as the best friend who is in love with Bella. Wonderful xxx
| smelsies chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I really like this story. I think it was very good.
| Deedlez01 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
This was a nice story, a little creepy though. I just can't see Carlisle as anything but the "dad".
| lovesam chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
it was good! I always love it when Jasper and Bella end up together.