|Reviews for Waiting in Sin|
| SereneButterfly23 chapter 12 . 3/7
O.M.F.G. I SWEAR. I read this story sooooooo long ago, when the story hadn't made it past year 6 yet. Then I reread it. And reread it. Hoping desperately for it to continue. Eventually, I had grown tired of waiting, and put it aside in favor of more rewarding pursuits. Soon enough, fanfiction as a whole became a distant memory and email updates didn't even make it into my inbox anymore. And then one day, I remembered this INGENIOUS fanfiction and returned to reread it (again). IMAGINE MY IMMENSE SURPRISE WHEN I SAW THAT IT WAS CONTINUED, AND TO THE END NO LESS. And so I read this whole thing in two days.
Seriously, this is my number one favorite fanfiction out here, no exceptions. I'm not even just trying to be mice. This is the one fanfiction that makes me cry, WITH LAUGHTER, and that is touching but not depressingly sad. I will most likely be back to reread this again because it is really THAT good.
I think my favorite thing about this fic is that 1) Ulquiorra as Harry is 100% believable 2) GRIMMJOW ('nuff said) and 3) fricking Murcielago is the funniest thing ever. I also loved the idea of Grimmjow and Luna being romantically attracted to each other, especially since Grimmjow seems like a playboy. Then again, I guess it makes sense that he'd fall for the weirdest girl.
All in all, I absolutely loved this, one hundred percent. The only tiny little problem is the grammar, but that's definitely not a bad problem, and I'm nitpicky about grammar anyway.
This review is reaaaallllly long, so I'll just end it here with I LOVE YOU AND THIS FIC.
| p3paula chapter 11 . 2/22
Perfect. albeit, i wanted more on the end. but it was perfect in its own right and with no further need to expound- an ending played well and stand alone.
devouring work in an afternoon is a nice read. fantastic!
| mndstjohn chapter 11 . 2/17
| chris678 chapter 3 . 2/15
ok, im sorry but this isn't ulquiorra. you've seen bleach right, sure he looks like harry, but where harry tells lupin that he would never kill and he would win without becoming a monster, ulquiorra would have killed all the death eaters in the graveyard and ended the series 3 books earlier. you said that wizards have rieatsu and yet your saying that ulquiorra wouldn't even try anything just spend all those years as a classical. I understand that any substantially powerful anime character makes both dumbledore and voldemort look like if a character is too powerful either dont use them or make things more difficult, there are plenty of stories in which powerful characters dont steamroll the rest of the world. but probably the worst part is the way that this story comes, i mean this isn't even a crossover really it just canon plus a commentary. I get that writing an original plot is difficult and time consuming, but this is just one of the laziest crossovers i've seen using the crossover as an excuse to rewrite canon without a copyright infringement.
| chris678 chapter 1 . 2/15
Ok, hoping the rest of it is more direct but if its just the start, it really good.
| blackmagelikesevilpie chapter 5 . 2/14
What is the point of having Not!Harry if he does the EXACT same things Canon!Harry did? Why do you quote the books, why does he do everything the same except some witty banter that doesn't change anything in the end?
Harry and Leroy, with the power of an Arranchar (even a tiny little bit) would stomp all over everything magic like it was their bitch. No contest, no problems.
I can't read a rehash of the books like this, it was an interesting idea but you killed it by not even trying to deviate and be creative. Maybe a rewrite would be good since you've finished this now.
| Skyray chapter 5 . 1/29
Okay, I know he's a hormonal pre-teen with zero common sense, and OC, but this inexplicable follow of the book plot is just killing the story! He talks about stuff being trash but only this point it's only a habit; he never does anything about it or attempt to get any skills above "lazy loser who knows 3-4 spells and is still overconfident for no reason"... Does he even know what he wants? His characters just feels like it has the personality and emotional range of a talking brick that's falling strait down the story-plot stairs...
So many of the scenes had such one-shot and/or story potential in this xover but never get used because it follows a set line :( I mean, I'm still hoping it's going somewhere... yes?
| Cheshire417 chapter 11 . 1/30
I could hardly believe there was a crossover for these two. It sounded interesting but I wasn't sure if it would turn out any good (like others of the same crossover I've tried) but WOW if you didn't blow me away! This was truly brilliant! The plot and the spectacularly portrayed blend of characters is definitely worth the few grammatical errors in this well written fic :)
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 11 . 1/11
I can't say this story was particularly good, unfortunately. Ulquiorra's character was NOT in character, and you practically took 90% of the dialogue straight from the books, with no real changes in canon until the final book. That's boring in my opinion, sorry.
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/5
hahaha this is awesome and i was seriously surprise to see ronald knox here.
| charm13insomnia chapter 11 . 1/4
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 12 . 12/28/2013
| MissySelenity chapter 12 . 12/18/2013
I love this story! There needs to be more Harry/Ulquiorra out there.
| The Man chapter 12 . 11/1/2013
Just finished re-reading it. Still love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
well that's confusing... lol