|Reviews for Against The Grain|
| Goomba chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
There are some definate (and multiple) grammatical errors that if corrected could make the story much stronger (I suggest an edit or a beta.) Aside from the little things it's okay. Not great but with good potential depending on where you plan to take this... so I hope to see some development soon.
Thanks and good luck, Jen
| bHaribo chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
I LOVE IT! please update soon! I LOVE ARTHUR AND HIS THREE PIECE SUITS :) I just melt a tiny bit when I think of him...
| baobei chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
| o0FLAM3S0o chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
| o0FLAM3S0o chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
| xxdarknessxfallsxx chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
This is great! You've spent a lot of time with the characters. Make sure you continue!
| DaOnLeeSam chapter 2 . 8/1/2010
love it! update soon! please! )
| Adids14 chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
| D's Blue eyes chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
ooo Arthur is in trouble lol! why are these chapters so short? please update soon _
| llashan chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
""Others?" It was then that Arthur knew the precise moment he realized he was an idiot."
Loved this line the most :D
Haha major fail!Arthur XD
| Arugula Pacioli chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
| Elliesmeow chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
Oh Arthur, you have gotten yourself into a sticky situation haven't you?LOL Hope he comes clean sooner rather than later. Eames will never let him hear the end of it otherwise.
| bella142 chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
AWESOME :) i HOPE you can update this as soon as possible! I want more reading of this story :)
| Goats for rent chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
| CourageToStandAlone chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
i like this a lot!
please update soon:)