Reviews for Forever United
madcloisfan chapter 5 . 7/6/2011
Loved it wish there was more
Team Rosalie chapter 5 . 1/9/2011
cute :)
Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
AWE! GIBBS PLAYING NICE? WOW. ANYWAYS, GREAT CHAPTER AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
Betherzz chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
cute chapter ;) set different ring tones then they would NOT have the issue answering each others phones LOL or put a sticker or a mark on them to tell them apart... lol gibbs finding out is kinda funny, tony havin the balls to hang up on gibbs is hysterical! shocked gibbs didnt show up 5 minutes later and kick their asses

cant wait to see what happens next
flashthunder chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
awww cute but i do want them to get married...eventually :)
jenny chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
that is so awesome you have to make more aNd more i love them!
Betherzz chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
cute chapter :) mcgee certainly wont be posting any more videos on his website LOL (at least i hope to hell he learned his lesson on that one) cant wait to see what comes next for tony & ziva and what crap abby & mcgee try to pull
Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Okay so I just like totally chugged a Coke and am cracking up and really have to go to the bathroom but I am going to finish this review first. Yes, her life has now become a really crappy chick flick! Totally agree. Bawhahaha, almost peed myself as I was reading that, anyways, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
DramioneLurver chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Love the ending line! Though I think my favorite bit was McGee posting it on his Deep Six site and all his fans loving it. Such a true reaction for fans. :D

Nice work!
Xcontents.pricelessX chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
Haha, the ending so cute! And our little Timmy really should've seen that one coming ;D I loved it 3
Malik The Night Angel chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
very nice
Seosh chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
hahaha! oh yeah ! revenge with McGoo this is gonna be fun!
Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
Okay so it's like 1:30 in the morning so I couldn't break out laughing or screaming to my inanimate computer but if I had read this earlier then I totally would have! I could hardly contain myself! Bawhahaha! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
georgesgurl117 chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
Great job! Looking forward to more.
flashthunder chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
omg i was laughing through the entire story! its perfect and awesome! go tiva!
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