|Reviews for Approaching Storm|
| Mijime chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
While reading this I found myself slowly inching towards the computer screen due to the amazingly described suspense. I loved the way you used the onomatopoeia thump, and how it *get's teary eyed* it.. it built up as Kyuubi got closer. And the last two lines. Beautiful. *claps*
| Balrog Roike chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
NOw I really want to know what happened in the last chapters. Pity I'm so much behind in my corner of the world.
It's interesting to see the calm before the storm - more or less.I like "a masked man bearing a grudge". I don't know why I like that line so much, I just do.
| ncfan chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Very ominous. I liked it, and thanks to this oneshot, I have now partially made my peace with the "official" version of the Kyuubi's attack.