Reviews for The Last Laugh
Lord-IVD chapter 1 . 4/9
No ! Bad Bolo's DO NOT self destruct !
Axcel chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
To those complaining about the Bolo not killing the titan with its guns, keep in mind that Warhammer 40K warships use hundreds of fusion bolts as part of their weapons batteries, each dealing dozens of megatons. A mark 33 Bolo's hellbores each deal roughly eight megatons. Bolos use fission bolts I think, which are far weaker than similarly sized fusion bolts. The weapons of an Imperator Titan (the only Titan that would "tower" over a Bolo) are each larger than one of the main turrets of a mark 33 Bolo.

Basically, yeah, an Imperator Titan would have a good chance of defeating a Bolo. Especially since battle screens are weak to individual, excessively powerful strikes, which Titans are very good at delivering. Of course, void shields are weak to rapid strikes, which hellbores are good at, but those hellbores deliver much less damage per-shot than a Titan's void shields are designed to withstand. Let alone the adamantium which can take hits from anti-matter (Necrons).

Most importantly, though, remember that it is a CHAOS TITAN. Chaos doesn't have to follow logic. It could make a sheet of paper become capable of withstanding a supernova. Imagine how much warp energy is empowering that thing! There is a reason why Chaos forces, despite being horribly outnumbered by the Imperium, still manage to break even with them.

Besides, the Bolo won with an epic bang, so respect its valorous sacrifice and feel pride in humanity and in being human!
A Dozen Lemmings chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
write more of these man.
cklammer chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
You should not have joined if you can't take a joke ...

Nice on-shot.
Sir Daniel Cross chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Yeah i sorta agree with the caps overkill dude down there xD

Sill its a good job, getting that feel for the bolo personality, something in which authors (not only fanfic writers, but the big ones too) use to utterly fail...
miner249er chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
good one-shot
Bolo Toothless MarkXXXlll chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
OH COME ON A BOLO EVEN IN THE 2OS COULD KILL THIS TITAN FROM WAY OUT SIDE IS RANGE IF NEED BE AND THE THING IS A WALKER, A BLOODY WALKER HAS LITTLE SPEED TO THE BOLOS AND I THINK ONE GOOD SHOT WOULD NOCK IT ON ITS BACK, SO GET REAL THE ONLY THING THAT CAN FIGHT A BOLO 1ON1 IS A BIGGER BOLO
JIM7 TeNderLoin chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Almost poetry. Very well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
niceness to the nth power
Lord Sia chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Beautiful.
Huitt1989 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Fantastic if a little bit sad great story.
Obssesed Nuker chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Huh, perfect. If a Bolo were too wind-up in 40K, it would take a Titan or a starship too down it, wouldn't it?

Although I suppose an extremely lucky Shadowsword could pull it off.

Is this a prologue in that the rest of the story will be a 'How We Got Here' one or just a one-shot?
Bobboky chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
nice
john777 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
A Bolo story, always like that metal soldiers.

Keep writing update soon.