|Reviews for Breach of Contract: Twelve Signs|
| Dave.New chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
Wow, that was one HELL of an ending!
The fight with the demon-Fellon was awesome to say the least, and then with Loki being a backstabbing git (always suspected him of being a turn coat), and then the words of wisdom given by Jensen.
And the ending...
Oh I wanna hurt you! Haha!
The ending was just brilliant, especially with Harry fighting off the renewal's and attempting to not become complaicent.
Part of me does hope you'll make a sequel, but at the same time, I reckon its good where it ended. The whole idea of having the world crumble for him would be awesome to read, especially if its anything like this.
It was a great read in the end, and I'm glad I followed it from start to finish.
| Miss Mercury101 chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
This has been such a good story. It's written so well, and you can definitely see that you've been planning this for a long because of the depth that you go into - with relationships, and with the details of the ritual.
| Julian Carax chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
No sequel my friend.
This should not be milked - it's ended wonderfully.
I always feel bad when authors bring out these great, long chapters - and by that I mean good great, long chapters - and I only write a few lines in my reviews but I've nothing bad to say (even managed to follow the time line this time!) and plenty of good things.
I especially liked that Hermione and Ron were barely in it - they annoy me.
I look forward to your next piece.
| Siven80 chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
I enjoyed that.
Nice to read and something totally new ive not read before.
Wouldnt worry about the low reviews. Only reason for that is cos its not slash, cliches ridden or a bash fic which is 99% of fics here nowadays. So grats on this lovelt fic :)
| kmfrank chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
A fine ending to a wonderful story. Sad to see it end, but glad for the resolution.
Great job on this,
| Darth Kottaram chapter 4 . 8/19/2010
This is really, really good. Thank you for your work.
| ryuou chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
| Andor Swiftblade chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
This story is really intriguing, and I'm surprised that it has got so few reviews.
The thing that I find really unique about this story is the contract that Harry used to shift reality. I've read many stories where Harry time-travelled or crossed dimensions, but those were always due to accidents, or when he jumped through the Veil of Death and some such ideas. I find this concept refreshing. I've seen many uses of contract - like marriage contracts, for example - but I've never seen a contract being used to shift reality. So you get a cookie for that.
And I really like the atmosphere that you've created. The suspense has been maintained till the end, and I really like that in Suspense stories.
I had a certain feeling that Remus was going to die soon, especially when I read the scene between Harry and Remus in the last chapter. I knew that he was going to go after Harry in someway, but I'd never guessed that it would be due to the CK. I expected him to attack because Harry was shagging his ex.
And I had contemplated that Remus himself might have been the CK, because he was a werewolf, and thus a magical creature. But I'd never expected it to be that ghost reporter. Guess you can still surprise me; and that's saying something. Nowadays, stories are so cliche that I always know what is going to come next without even reading it, but this story I've not been able to get a hook on.
I really hope that after completing this story, you will continue to write new stories, preferably one with Harry/Fleur/Tonks pairing; how about it?
Well, that's all I have to say for now. I hope that you'll update soon.
May your sword stay sharp!
| ludpeshko chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
Brilliant, a bit over a week away and I've returned to two new chapters. )
Onto the chapter itself, I actually paused for a second while typing here... but I didn't come up with anything else but to say once again - brilliant! Yeap, I do sound like a rabid fanboy here, but I simply like your story that much! ;)
I read at DLP Amerison commented that you've rushed the H/T part, but it didn't feel out of place. The pacing somehow lead to it and it felt right at place.
Perhaps I can say a bit more, but I still have another chapter to read, so I'll just point out a small error:
"I did not like having all the answers." - you've missed the "not" in that statement and changed the meaning.
| Zeeko chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
This is easily the best Mystery/Suspense HP fanfic I've read so far. I cannot wait for the final chapter!
| chlorinehamster chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
Nice one! Didn't see that one coming; I thought the Constellation Killer was Lupin.
| xScottx chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
just a headsup this story got put up in the for review section on dlp and 4 stars so far, good start man.
| chrisguy9017 chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
NIce chapter. Remus is gone, I would never have guessed his death would have been so tame, not in the sense of gore because he was torn in two, but the drama surrounding his death. I guess that is what happens when you are a hermit.
| Shinysavage chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
Ok, as I've said elsewhere, this is pretty damn awesome. Great writing, engaging plot, good character work...not much to critique really. And the action in this chapter was very nice. Looking forward to more!
| Julian Carax chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
This is damn good stuff. Well thought out - although I get confused by the flashbacks now and again - and... well, exciting! Killing off Remus was a nice touch.
And the Jenson thing - where they were buried. Just beautiful.
Keep up the great work.