Reviews for Awakening
EverDreamer chapter 46 . 12/23/2011
This story was absolutely amazing. It was well written and the plot was incredible. I have no complaints! :)
Guest chapter 23 . 9/14/2011
3_3 love it!
ArgetlamShadowmoon chapter 46 . 8/17/2011
This was such an awesome story! I loved every second of it. There was the occasional missed letter, but nothing that would detract from the story.

I loved the multitude of plots you kept in the air at one time. That is the mark of a truly talented writer to have so many plot lines to weave around and all finally be tied up at the end of the story. Most writers have one or two plot lines, not quite the multitude like you.

It was a brilliant story and I especially loved the occasional Fanille moment.

I loved your incorporation of Etro and your description of many different FF characters and summons, etc.

XD - This is your requested emoticon. I loved this story and can't wait to see more from you.

-Corey
Sirl.19 chapter 13 . 2/3/2011
Hahaha three pages? Really?

Then, HERE WE GO!

Sorry, couldn't resist.

Few more things.

"Qué potito" was just some stupid phrase. It's something like 'how beautiful' or 'how cute' x)

And yes, it was epic in a good way, of course

Oh, btw, no idea what happened with that chapter I sent like 3 reviews... My phone just went crazy T.T
Sirl.19 chapter 46 . 2/3/2011
That was so epic

I loved, LOVED the story, and thank you for the happy ending

... What else. I am adding this to favorites. I thought it was already obvious, but just in case, I'm telling you.

I enjoyed this a lot. Not only the story, but also reviewing and getting your responses for each review

...I'll be back.
Sirl.19 chapter 45 . 2/3/2011
"Her loss of hope had called her Eidolon."

Ha! See? It was on purpose, somehow.

"Get a room!"

Poor Dajh, he's always like that x)

"When we get back, not 'if'"

That's the Fang that always makes me smile.

"What's the first thing you're going to do?" "You. Need to ask?"

Seriously, Vanille...

"I'm going to ask Light what took her so long."

"Fang chuckled" and so did every person who read that x)

_

Hahaha! They're back! D

Ahd, hey, Fang almost kept her word. XD
Sirl.19 chapter 44 . 2/3/2011
Can't believe that.

By the way, Fang is sweet
Sirl.19 chapter 43 . 2/3/2011
"Hope, oh thank the Maker," Lightning paused a moment, considering the irony of the phrase. Maybe she could change that idiom.

LOL

Oohh, qué potitoo... *.*

(Don't even try to understand that, I just had to say it) x)

And yeah, I liked the end

3 to go!
Sirl.19 chapter 42 . 2/2/2011
Of course, you had to write that epic speech. Haha. )

Anyway, good chapter.

We're 4 chapters to the end...

To be honest, don't wanna get there.
Sirl.19 chapter 42 . 2/2/2011
Of course, you had to write that epic speech. Haha. )

Anyway, good chapter.
Sirl.19 chapter 42 . 2/2/2011
Of course, you had to write that epic speech. Haha. )

Anyway, good chapter.

We're 4 chapters to the end...

To be honest, don't wanna get there.
Sirl.19 chapter 41 . 2/2/2011
"I'm always kind and cute," Fang shot back, chuckling. "Well, not cute, You're the cute one,"

Yay! Gottcha!

"I would also like to say, contrary to your magazines, neither Hope, Fang, Vanille, Snow, nor Serah, was my lover."

LOL LMAO

"She sounds disappointed," Fang whispered

...Are YOU disappointed, Fang? (Sorry, sorry, i'll stop it) x)

"Once she starts glaring at you, there's no saying 'no'."

You would know it, right, Fang?

...*Moving on*

Oh, finally! Well, I never thought I would say this but... I was missing Hope.

Nop. Definitely not a good day.
Sirl.19 chapter 40 . 2/2/2011
Why does Lightning compare Fang to animals?

Anyway.

Then again, she spoke to Fang. Not Fang and Vanille. Just Fang.

Sorry, I know I keep saying that, but it is the best way I have to lighten all that darker stuff that's been going on lately.

"But you tried, twenty years." "I'd do it again"

You almost had me crying on that.

...The end was... Weird? I don't know. Not saying I didn't like it, at all. It was just weird.
Sirl.19 chapter 39 . 2/2/2011
Yeah, I'm gonna keep saying it. They are so cute

And I like Fang when she's kind too, makes me smile.

And no, I haven't abandoned you. I couldn't even if I wanted to, this is too addictive x). I've just been busy today.
Sirl.19 chapter 38 . 2/2/2011
"The Maker beheld with fury. Red and black. Red hair and black hair"

I was kinda distracted while reading that and, don't know why, Asura came to mind.
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