Reviews for The Never-Ending War
secret lisa chapter 5 . 7/9
How cleverly done was this
Using Luna to gather memories for a wedding gift (and beyond) was gold!
Loved the many parts played and their inputs.
So good.
Well done you
eunhaegf chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
I could read this over and over again and never gt bored of it. I love most of your story plot. Its refreshing and creative. The draco and ginny on your fanfic always made me fall for them again n again. If you have other website where you posted your draco ginny story please do let me know. Anyway thanks for sharing this awesome story here 3
cactuscorsage chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
God damn it, I have this huge dopey smile on my face and it's all your fault! I've been stalking your profile, and I don't understand how someone can be so talented.

Oh, and Draco demanding that they get married was so perfectly character appropriate I don't know what to do with myself.
Linnn chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
Honestly, you're just so creative and so wonderful and your writing is delightfully poignant. I've been spending the past week just reading your work and you display so much mastery and artistry in it it hurts to think that I'll run out of your stories to read. Please don't ever stop, I feel like I can't read anyone else now just because you have such a nuanced and tasteful way of writing that I won't find anywhere, and I need my DG indulgence! I'm so glad you exist. Is that weird? I suppose it is, but it's true! Have you got original stories of your own by any chance? I'd love to read them!

Lin
Carla chapter 5 . 8/6/2011
That was so cleverly done! I loved it. PEOPLE READ THIS STORY. IT'S AWESOME!
yourbeautifulnightmare chapter 5 . 5/3/2011
...I am speechless... that was.. ...the concept of your story was absolutely brilliant. every line written was refined and well-done - not a word was wasted. I really, really love how you wrote this in such a realistic fashion. I think that is my absolute most favourite thing about this story. just. wow. well done. you deserved all your awards.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/14/2011
Ahhh Jess this was amazing! I really enjoyed reading this from start to finish!

Your spin on the prompt was original. The story had a flowing pace which made it a pleasent read.

*adds to favorite*

Thank you my dear!

Shai xx
Miss-Talkative chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Awww I like how you have used Astoria in this! The banter between D/G was perfect just how I imagined them to interact after a long time. These two particular paragraphs made me chuckle:

"Well, how about I give you a reason to care?" he asked. "I'll win this tournament for you."

Very Malfoyish of him and the fact

that he already had the snitch makes it even better!

"Of course. I asked for your father's permission three years ago, and your mum's exact words were, 'It's about time!'" His impression of Mrs. Weasley was uncannily accurate.

A lovely chapter Jess! Thank you!

Shai xx
Miss-Talkative chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
I love how canon Pansy is and I enjoyed reading her perspective. The kiss was written deliciously! Another great chapter! _

Shai xx
Miss-Talkative chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
"At least I know for certain that I'm an only child," he snarled.

"What?" Ginny asked in confusion.

"For all you know, you had ten more brothers and your mother ate them all!"

Hahahaha! This had me laughing so hard!

I really like the concept of the story, very original...The picnic wars were great. I think you write then as children really well! On to the next chapter!

Shai x
Miss-Talkative chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
So I was stalking your profile and read the summary and thought ooooh this sounds interesting, I wasn't disappointed! Awww little Luna and Ginny are cute. So I'm guessing Luna is looking through her own memories...but why? I should read on! Great start Jess!

Shai xx
digitalwitch18 chapter 5 . 12/2/2010
I just finished reading your lovely story. I have to say it was one of the most original, and beautifully written stories I have ever read. I love the idea of Luna gathering Draco’s and Ginny’s memories for a wedding gift. What a beautiful and thoughtful gift. You also wrote the memories wonderfully, capturing both Draco’s and Ginny’s personalities better than I have read before. Thank you for sharing your story.
opaque-girl chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
I loved how the tables turned around - Once she had tried to convince him that he did love her. Now he had to do the same. It was brillant. These lines were my favorite:

Suddenly grabbing Weasley's shoulders and pinning them against the wall, Draco said, "You're mine, do you hear? You always have been and always will be. Dump Potter. Be with me."

"I will win this whole tournament for you."

The only thing that didn't work for me was Ginny's profession - I found it boring and a bit unrealistic. I doubt she will settle for something like that.
opaque-girl chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
I loved how jeolous Draco was.. Yay, Yay, Yay! :D

Twelve-year-old Draco wanted Ginny for himself.

Awww, this line is so cute :)
opaque-girl chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
The last line was so, so Ginny! D

I loved the part where Draco smirked at her.. it was just so cute :) i also liked Draco's comments about her mother.. they were hailrous!

You wrote Ginny's thoughts brillantly - Just perfect for her young age :D The detailing done was amazing - It made it so much more intresting :D
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