Reviews for The First Family
Guest chapter 9 . 5/19/2014
UPDATE!
k chapter 9 . 6/30/2013
you need to write more this is amazing so far please write more!
lover chapter 9 . 9/13/2012
please update! i think this story has a good plot, would realy like to see that bitch get what she deserves after drugging bella...
reobessed chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
nice update
may96 chapter 9 . 2/20/2012
it's good. although it's hard to tell when it transitions to another day/time/etc.I don't get the end of this chapter. will you resume writing this story?
allers306 chapter 9 . 11/22/2011
Please update this one! It has such amazing potential!
Book-Nerd 4 lyfe chapter 9 . 9/30/2011
Love it. Please update soon (:
XxPixiePowerxX chapter 9 . 7/16/2011
i like it so far
Hope Edwards chapter 9 . 5/11/2011
great story update soon
dragolove chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I LOVE your story it's amazing
Husky2014 chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
OH NO I think someone picked the lock and they may still be in the house! I hope Bella and Edward can work things out!
LiLi82 chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
love it
Husky2014 chapter 8 . 12/26/2010
LOVED IT!
lilmstran chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
loved it

glad they are slowly progressing

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter

happy holidays!
haleyscott305 chapter 8 . 12/21/2010
Loved it. Thanks for te update it was great!
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