Reviews for A Moment in History
fairyninja73 chapter 5 . 11/7/2016
This was a really nice story...
N them all dying was unexpected but worked out fine
So no complications with future self n past n all that
Thanks for the great story
jj chapter 5 . 6/30/2016
good story ill look for the sequel
OriksGaming chapter 5 . 4/21/2016
I kinda wish it had been edited a bit more, but it was a good story overall.
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 4/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 4/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 4/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
jcampbellohten chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
I am very happy with this. There are some technical details that could be fixed, but I really like this premise and I don't mind the sappy parts.
jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 10/20/2015
Aww, feels!

"All the more quickly," not "all the more faster." "Staring", not starring.
jcampbellohten chapter 2 . 10/20/2015
I like this so far. I'm assuming you knew how the actual Izanami jutsu works when you wrote this? Grammar-wise, there are some capitalized words that shouldn't be, like "ninja/shinobi", "ninjutsu", "space-time", etc. Also, it's "Hashirama", not Hirashima.
hyperlunatic chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
Ps: Anonymous Flamers can go to hell and burn in Hellfire
good story a little bit sappy ending but still good, keep up the good work author.
Amuto-Narusaku4ever chapter 5 . 1/1/2015
Si que sabes como hacer llorar a alguien! :'c, no es el tipico fanfic de viaje en el tiempo para QUEDARSE ahi... ellos fueron a sacrificarse y morir para que las cosas cambien, no hay madara, no akatsuki, yondaime vivo... de verdad es triste pero me gusto mucho sinceramente y es algo diferente...
Amuto-Narusaku4ever chapter 3 . 1/1/2015
¿Por que murió sasuke? ¿era necesario para la historia? :c ...
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 10/9/2014
Well done, happy yet sad and well adapted. Thanks!
xyz chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Wow, just - WOW! *Reads first chapter* it wa PERFECT! Just the right degree of drama, action, and perfect - in my opinion, at least - characterisation! It couldn't be better *has stars in her eyes*
Thank You For Writing!
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