Reviews for A Moment in History
jcampbellohten chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
I am very happy with this. There are some technical details that could be fixed, but I really like this premise and I don't mind the sappy parts.
jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 10/20/2015
Aww, feels!

"All the more quickly," not "all the more faster." "Staring", not starring.
jcampbellohten chapter 2 . 10/20/2015
I like this so far. I'm assuming you knew how the actual Izanami jutsu works when you wrote this? Grammar-wise, there are some capitalized words that shouldn't be, like "ninja/shinobi", "ninjutsu", "space-time", etc. Also, it's "Hashirama", not Hirashima.
hyperlunatic chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
Ps: Anonymous Flamers can go to hell and burn in Hellfire
good story a little bit sappy ending but still good, keep up the good work author.
Amuto-Narusaku4ever chapter 5 . 1/1/2015
Si que sabes como hacer llorar a alguien! :'c, no es el tipico fanfic de viaje en el tiempo para QUEDARSE ahi... ellos fueron a sacrificarse y morir para que las cosas cambien, no hay madara, no akatsuki, yondaime vivo... de verdad es triste pero me gusto mucho sinceramente y es algo diferente...
Amuto-Narusaku4ever chapter 3 . 1/1/2015
¿Por que murió sasuke? ¿era necesario para la historia? :c ...
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 10/9/2014
Well done, happy yet sad and well adapted. Thanks!
xyz chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Wow, just - WOW! *Reads first chapter* it wa PERFECT! Just the right degree of drama, action, and perfect - in my opinion, at least - characterisation! It couldn't be better *has stars in her eyes*
Thank You For Writing!
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 5 . 8/15/2014
Do you ever write the sequel?
jjs chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
whatever happened to the sequel?
Huggles chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
This was a beautiful shot part story! I even cried at the end. Any story that can touch a person's emotions like that deserves a favourite. Thank you so much for writing this.
Manillalu chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
Beautiful, dramatic, short and sweet. A Bittersweet, but totally satisfying read
Random Peep chapter 4 . 2/27/2014
Sad .
N Harmonic chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
that really gets me... those last words that speak of them waking up again...
Yuu3 chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
...Everyone died but happy ever after? Nonetheless, love it and fave it.
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