|Reviews for A Sweet Exchange|
| AngstySyaoran chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Cute. Nice build up of events. Syaoron really is utterly distracted with Yuui isn't he. He doesn't even remember the date! XD
Noticed a few more spelling mistakes 'make students' instead of 'male students' and a missing speech mark at the beginning of Yuui saying 'Syaoron-kun' before saying he needed to talk to him (that bit is fine, just the 'Syaoron-kun' part is missing a speechmark.
Otherwise all looks good. Very sweetly written. And remember that scene in the rp. SyaoYuui's cutest moment IMO
| The Random Ninja chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Awww, cuteness Llamarama3
Just one small spelling mistake that I want to point out: Though someone with a god eye would be able to tell that it was hand-made.
I'm guessing you meant "good" instead of "god". So...yeah. xD
Anyways, very cute and in character3