|Reviews for Life in Red|
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/12/2013
Araytigre here, another great tie in. It's good to see that Lawson is the honorable type, as there are all too many out there that would have taken advantage of the situation. Getting up somewhere where you know that you are alone, go take a shower, come out and run into someone, would freak out just about anyone. Their day together went well until the "D" word was brought up, and I can understand where she was uncomfortable about it (been there, done that, unfortunately). It is extremely difficult to maintain your composure in a situation like Allison's, not knowing whether or not someone you care for (Parent, Sibling, Lover, etc.) is alive or not. Fortunately, her Mom is alive (barely). I am very much enjoying your weaving of your take of the Movies. Thank You. TTFN
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/9/2013
BTW, This is Araytigre, I had to log out review this chap, and I noticed that you have rearranged this a little (as we were already on Ch. 25 back in October!) Sweet! Nice tie in with the second ST Movie, and I suspect that the next chapter will tie in some more. Fun. Congrats, good luck in the Reserves. She needs to take the bull by the horns and Kiss him already, preferably before their shore leave is over, which will be soon enough. Now to go back and see what else has changed. Thank You. TTFN
| oratio-obliqua chapter 19 . 7/26/2013
I'm still reading, I don't know if I count as an original though. But I definitely enjoy the story! Thank you!
| rmayagins chapter 19 . 7/23/2013
I don't think I've been here since the beginning, but I've been reading for a while and I like catching up on these folks :-) I'm excited for this upcoming arc and I wish you all the best at basic! (PS "I didn't care I barely felt it" — needs a comma or something! Sorry ) Thanks for writing and sharing 3
| Sym chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Very nice! I really do like this story. The plot is interesting enough to keep the reader reading more. The characters are very good and i just love Danville! Shes very badass. I also like how very good u r of protraying the canon characters! Very realistic! Hope to see more chapters soon!
Live Long and Prosper
| Illogical Human chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
Hehehe...Would have been funny if Spock saw Lawson with his new face. XD
| Hittocere chapter 25 . 10/6/2012
As far as fillers go it was highly entertaining, and imagining Lawson looking like Spock is always good for a laugh. Great chappie!
| Lycoris1305 chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
Haha I'd love to know why Lawson choose her door to be drunk outside of. I especially love how Danville just rolled him off the bed in the end, just like "I'm too tired to give a crap about how you feel right now, so have fun on the floor!"
But keep up the good work I'm looking forward to another chapter, whenever you find the time. And good luck with your creative writing class!
| Araytigre chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
Well at least she didn't get shot on this away mission, just got into a tussle with some weirdo's. Somehow I think that you are working this into maybe a ship between her and Lawson (or at least a fling or two), of course he still has some growing to do yet, lol. Thank You. TTFN
| Araytigre chapter 23 . 6/3/2012
Theirs ALWAYS another away mission, and when you ain't in charge, you don't get a choice whether or not you go most of the time. As for Ally transferring to work with her Mom is probably not a good idea for all the reasons that she came up with, and after all she IS on the "Enterprise" for crying out loud, the premier starship of the fleet! Nuff Said! Thank You. TTFN
| Araytigre chapter 22 . 4/24/2012
Nice little filler chapter, just a little excitement, nothing to worry about. It seems that Dr. Lawson is starting to learn to not to be such a prat, we'll see how long that lasts. TTFN
| Araytigre chapter 21 . 3/23/2012
Lawson is so so clueless, he probably wouldn't recognize sabotage if it walked up and bit him on the aft, oh, it did, See! Lol She was lucky that Security didn't get on her case about the phaser. Oh well, no rest for the weary (or hungry), back to work Allison. TTFN
| Hittocere chapter 20 . 3/6/2012
Yay, you spoil with updates. What of Spock's jellyfish of doom? And Lawson was the "you owe me one" for the paper or the stunning of the bitch from hell with sharp ass nails? Mind you, this is not me being confused, this me laughing at some of their reactions. I love the 'creative' street names, at least it wasn't Old Road, New Road, Red Road, Blue Road, or the worst yet... Yellow belly lane.
Loved the chappy, and happy to leave comments for you anytime. Even if they don't make the slightest bit of sense at times. XD Bye for now
| Araytigre chapter 20 . 3/5/2012
At least she survived this away mission with only a few bumps and bruises. I'll have to see if I can find the comic that you were referring too. And yes Scotty does seem to thrive during pressure situations, as does our Ally. TTFN
| Araytigre chapter 19 . 3/4/2012
Lawson is such a prat, I liked what McCoy did, and I can't wait to find out what happened! Looks like another "Away Mission" coming up to me, could be fun (or not, lol). TTFN