Reviews for Life in Red
afroz9797 chapter 25 . 11/25/2014
can't wait for an update!
Araytigre chapter 25 . 11/23/2014
Ah man! Her Baby just got trashed big time, and at that day and age, it is extremely difficult to get parts for a '67 Impala. Well... it looks like Ally is going to be seeing a lot more of Lawson than she anticipated, and unfortunately, not in the way that she would like it to be. Sadly, this happened just after she told him that she Loved him. Hopefully, she won't be in the Hospital too long, as she would hate to be still grounded when the Enterprise ships out again. Thank You. TTFN
shadowelf144 chapter 24 . 11/5/2014
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Guest chapter 24 . 8/28/2014
Not a review- just wanted to wish you fair seas and Godspeed while onboard the eagle
Guest chapter 23 . 7/28/2014
Araytigre here again! Another exitement filled chapter, I just wish that you would stop rearranging the chapters so I don't have to review as a guest until we get caught back up to where we were. Well, I guess we can't have everything, lol, so we must do what we must do to carry on, lol. Another great tie-in with the Movies. I really like how you use Ally and her freinds telling "the other side of the story" of what else is happening somewhat behind the scenes of the movies, yet also being it's own story too. With her Mom getting better, it will remain to be seen whether or not she will continue with the divorce plan, hopefully with this latest debacle, she will have rethought her position on that. It is sad that our parents always find out about things, and then call us on them at the most inopportune times. Thank You. TTFN
Illogical Human chapter 23 . 7/28/2014
Congratulations on graduating! I like how you worked the movie in with the story. Got the point across without being so drawn out.
skywave chapter 23 . 7/27/2014
I like what you've done, when most people write stories involving the star trek films their character is always there with the main crew, and the writer is just rehashing the movie but giving their character some lines. You've done something different, and it really expands the universe; you get to see what a crew member that's not high ranking is going through.

I can't wait for more :D
afroz9797 chapter 22 . 6/14/2014
hey, i really loved the whole story from a red cadet's point of view...u should continue!
MistoffelessTrekyManiac chapter 22 . 3/16/2014
awww come on let her have a moment where she meets khan please?
MistoffelessTrekyManiac chapter 20 . 3/16/2014
Guest chapter 21 . 12/12/2013
Araytigre here, another great tie in. It's good to see that Lawson is the honorable type, as there are all too many out there that would have taken advantage of the situation. Getting up somewhere where you know that you are alone, go take a shower, come out and run into someone, would freak out just about anyone. Their day together went well until the "D" word was brought up, and I can understand where she was uncomfortable about it (been there, done that, unfortunately). It is extremely difficult to maintain your composure in a situation like Allison's, not knowing whether or not someone you care for (Parent, Sibling, Lover, etc.) is alive or not. Fortunately, her Mom is alive (barely). I am very much enjoying your weaving of your take of the Movies. Thank You. TTFN
Guest chapter 20 . 12/9/2013
BTW, This is Araytigre, I had to log out review this chap, and I noticed that you have rearranged this a little (as we were already on Ch. 25 back in October!) Sweet! Nice tie in with the second ST Movie, and I suspect that the next chapter will tie in some more. Fun. Congrats, good luck in the Reserves. She needs to take the bull by the horns and Kiss him already, preferably before their shore leave is over, which will be soon enough. Now to go back and see what else has changed. Thank You. TTFN
oratio-obliqua chapter 19 . 7/26/2013
I'm still reading, I don't know if I count as an original though. But I definitely enjoy the story! Thank you!
rmayagins chapter 19 . 7/23/2013
I don't think I've been here since the beginning, but I've been reading for a while and I like catching up on these folks :-) I'm excited for this upcoming arc and I wish you all the best at basic! (PS "I didn't care I barely felt it" — needs a comma or something! Sorry ) Thanks for writing and sharing 3
Sym chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Very nice! I really do like this story. The plot is interesting enough to keep the reader reading more. The characters are very good and i just love Danville! Shes very badass. I also like how very good u r of protraying the canon characters! Very realistic! Hope to see more chapters soon!

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