Reviews for Damage Control: My version of the ending
EMily chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
MMMMOOOOre that was really good please add more chapters!
hooperchick24 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Amazing story. I really liked it. You should write more versions for season 2. :)
The Phantom Dragon chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
SashaMonroe chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
You were thinking the same thing I was at the end of that episode. Good Job!
uncontrolable-necromancer chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
... whos Necros? then again, i dont know what the book/movie that you got this from, oh wells, still nice...


you would expect me to crumble

but truly, in happy

without you, and with him.

in a new darkness, were the moon shines, and the stars twinkle"

thesunlight888888 at .com
SECUREZONEICON chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
all you id was write the end of Damage control which was completely beast
Aspen Starlight chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
This was pretty good. I was actually thinking of writing something similar, but set after he collapsed. You might want to go back through and space out the dialogue better, since every time someone new talks they get a new line. You don't have to, though it does make the story easier to read. :D