Reviews for When Fantasy Becomes Reality
Vani88 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
This is officially my new favorite. Agreed, those "resemblances" are far-fetched, but the lemons were absolutely awesome :)
OnTheTurningAway chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
*jumping up and down squeeing like a pre-teen*

Argh! This is just so, so good, ladies! Poor S&S Edward, leaving his love and friends behind, makes quite a fortuitous stop in Utah. I loved his description of Jazzy - and how he simply cannot believe that this man who is Jasper's doppleganger is clearly interested in him. It's like the best possible scenario for Edward and maybe the step he needs to take to start moving on with his life.

And Jazzy...oh sweet jesus I love this man! He's perfect - brash and confident and sexy as hell. I mean, this is so freaking hot:


"Because I'm sure I'm a way better fuck," he smirked, his eyes blazing with want.

"Holy shit," I whispered, my breath lost somewhere in my throat, my heart halting in my chest. Never had anyone blatantly been so sexual with me, well, at least not until we were already naked and in bed. Throbbing, my cock ached with need and I shifted my weight.


Of course the sexy bits were insanely hot. I don't know how you girls manage to do it time and time again, but I am happy you do! And the ending? With the big name reveal? I was laughing and smiling for Edward that he really did get to live out a fantasy - one that was probably far superior to reality.

Thank you for this fantastic b-day gift! xoxo
ReapMe chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
omg. puddle. 3 I love it. you should write a sequel!
bbbluez chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
onnersmom chapter 1 . 7/24/2010

that wasn't what i was expecting... but nevertheless, wonderful! GREAT JOB GUYS!

HopeStreet chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
That was amazing and hot!
Lori94 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Love it!
JoAnn H chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I loved it! Maybe this Jazzy will cum visit!
robownsme chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I'm so glad Perfectward got to be with Jasper! I know it's not S&S Jasper, but damn if it wasn't hot and amazing all the same. I love both these stories so much! Thank you ladies for getting together and making not only Perfectward's fantasy come true, but ours as well.
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I don't know why J/E slash turns me on so freaking much? But yummy and now I want more!
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