Reviews for Betreyal
Ivy000 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Okay, that's creepy and confusing. I really don't know what to make of this.
Sun's Rays chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Grrr... GET TO THE ADVENTURE! Please visit my profile and read & review a story called Back to the Past which happens to be my first fanfiction! If you do, you get a cookie!11(whoops, I mean ! so yeah read and review ok I should probably stop now bye.)
Myfangirlthings chapter 2 . 12/21/2011
nice story. I wonder why Cornelius would kill Wilbur.
My Vantilene chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
Zinka17 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I'm glad to see this if finally updated! Well not really finally as it was updated on June 24th but I just now checked it. lol Anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It's really getting suspenseful and I wanna know why Lewis wants to kill him!
Shadowmaster2323 chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
Seems like an interesting story. If I were you though, and I am. xD Just kidding I had to say it. I've been watching the movie too much. ANYWAY I would put more spaces in the story. Other than that, great job! :D
Pheonix Autumn chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
RemmyBlack chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
interesting storyline and very hooking *whispers*damn fish hooks*normalvoice* anyway though you have chapter 1 reloaded as chapter 2
Zinka17 chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Well this sounds very interesting and I wanna read more, but you have the 1st chapter as chapter 2. Why?
Commander Ael chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
You've got the same chapter uploaded for both. Sounds like it's okay, though.
DamagedCargo chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
interesting story! you've got me hooked!