Reviews for Zero is Mine
Mmm chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
There are pronouns in the English language for a reason, use them instead of say kaname this and zero that then kaname this again. It gets Tiring fast and makes your story choppy instead smooth.
Queen Preferences chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Type your review here...
yAoIfAn18 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
awww zero so cute and kaname is sexy vampie god heh
Lokilovesthorki chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Love it
iiTeddyBear chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Sorry but I didn't like it at all...I frickin' Loved it!
Rin chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Very nice!
Princess Maki chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
loved it
Wakaka that keep stalking Zero chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I'm no grammar teacher so I can't really comment on it but this is good. I always know that Zero is lewd LOL. Kidding. Still, I like it.
rosaikibu chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
hey...good one...

a bit of grammer issue...but i just let my imagination do the work and guess what you still get me high...

hehe...really, the way you wrote this...GOOD
wintersubaki chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
No, kaname..zero is mine :p
IlOvEmUsIcAnDyAoI chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Very nice. Though I hate Kaname now.. Damn him for claiming Zero before I could get to him..
aly3elf101 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
So hot. Yes it was kinda short but it was great. hahaha wonder who had their eyes on Zero... Its fun to think about. :)
24neor chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I love it! So good :3
ben4kevin chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
very good
Olympos chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
:D! -favs-!
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