|Reviews for Super Mario Beach|
| christian the 10 year old chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
i love your story it doesnt need any sugestions what so ever even though i gave total mario island so many suggestions but i really love your story its brillant keep going on it u have a real talent
| CrossoverMike chapter 10 . 8/7/2010
Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Vanessa Osbourne chapter 10 . 8/6/2010
Hey, you deleted the chapter I reviewed. T.T
oh well. this was funny too. )
| DemiNintendoSun chapter 9 . 8/6/2010
Umm...one question...Is there supposed to be ten chapters or nine? Because I think one chapter is missing you know the one with the Luigi/Daisy moment and the checking of the bomb explosion. This is chapter nine and the sandcastle chapter is number ten.
| Kaiimi chapter 9 . 8/5/2010
Hmm...it's good but it needs to have a little more emotion and not seem so boring, okay? But other than that, it's quite good.
| Vanessa Osbourne chapter 9 . 8/5/2010
Nice! I am a HUGE fan of LuigiXDaisy, so that helped. AWESOME!
Keep. This. Up. PLZ PLZ PLZ WITH SUGAR AND SPRINKLES AND CHERRIES AND M&MS ON TOP OF THE WHIPPED-CREAM COVERED PANCAKE WITH CHOCOLATE CHIPS BAKED IN KEEP THIS UP!
| Vanessa Osbourne chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
HA! STUPID WICKED/WARIO BROS! HAHAHA! THEIR FALIURE MAKES ME SMILE AND LAUGH! HA! NICE UPDATE! WOOOT!
| Vanessa Osbourne chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
YAY! THEY MADE IT! WOOT! NOW WICKEDS ARE GONNA STOP THEM... NOT! WOOT!