Reviews for Breathe For Me
Hawthorn Berry chapter 23 . 2/26
This was a great fic to read! I really loved the part when Zoro forgot about Sanji's bandages and found him lying there waiting for him later. Ohhh it hurt so much it was awesome. And the zosan was really cute. I blushed a lot aha.

Anyways, to sum it up, I loved this story anddddd keep it up!
Littlesissy2001 chapter 1 . 1/14
Hilarious amd Great. Favorite line, I think Usopp crapted his pants though! I could not stop laughing!
Crimson Fox19 chapter 23 . 1/7
I loved the story! Too bad it's finished TT
CLOWNFISH14 chapter 23 . 12/14/2014
Love love love it!
Rueroux chapter 14 . 10/6/2014
Turtle shells don't seem to actually pose much problem. I accidentally witnessed turtle hanky panky at a zoo once and though I wish I could, I will never be able to erase that image from my mind... O.o

That said, this fic is niiiiicccce :3
anyandeveryanime chapter 23 . 9/17/2014
FUCK YOU I WANTED SMUT AND GODDAMIT THIS WAS BRILLIANT AND MY CHEST HURTS BECAUSE IT'S OVER YOU SUNOFABITCH I SWEAR GAWD I CAN'T NO IT'S TOO MUCH help omfg this was so fucking good and I love you just thought I'd toss that out there okay bye
YaoiCommander4ev chapter 17 . 8/30/2014
hahaha I sung your rendition of the ants go marching XD very clever. loving the story, your turtle chapter gave me an idea for a fic about how the crew think zoro ends up turned into a turtle. have you ever seen Brother where art thou? if you have it'll be similar to when the slow happy guy thinks his slow tall friend gets turned into a horny toad... if you haven't seen it then sorry for confusing you lol... I just gotta get up the will to wright again *sigh*
Codaline chapter 23 . 8/12/2014
That was beautiful! :)
RIna chapter 23 . 8/2/2014
Magnifico . una historia para recordad.

Gracias por todo.
c0pypa5ted3lete chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
"I never really got why people pick flowers. It doesn't matter how well you take care of them. You have to watch them slowly wither and die..."
I think that is the most beautiful quote ever holy shit. You are an amazing writer. Have I said that already? Oh well. You get to hear it again. dark!sanji hot!sanji woot
SakuraWindChime chapter 23 . 6/15/2014
What a beautiful story! I loved it from start till finish
nhjfbhjadbjvbsdjl chapter 23 . 5/18/2014
I'm crying because of thus WONDERFUL fic.
B chapter 18 . 4/16/2014
Toads are not reptiles but amphibians. Also, sometimes you mix up words, like "waist" instead of "waste". Other than that, a good read.
hollyivy7 chapter 3 . 3/10/2014
i really like this story! sanji is so self-sacrificial...
holic237 chapter 23 . 3/3/2014
So I've re-read most of this story several times, as new updates were coming out, but I knew I hadn't finished it so I decided to give it a go this weekend and finally finish. And apparently I had stopped at the next to last chapter. So really I just wanted to say how happy this final chapter made me. Everything leading up to it was wonderful of course, but the imagery in the last chunk there, the deal they made and the "let's go catch that horizon," gah it's making me teary just typing it. xD Makes me want to go catch my own horizon. And maybe someone to catch it with lol. The fact that they're going together of course strengthens an already poignant idea. I wonder, did you have this chapter planned out or written the entire time, considering the name of the fic came from here. The concept of breathing for, and essentially living for another person is very poetic, and gives life a greater sense of meaning than it would have simply living for yourself, so I very much enjoyed that. And again, the horizon thing, it's killing me with it's perfectness. So I know this story has been finished for a while but I just had to say, what a wonderful ending to an excellent story. Thanks. )
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