|Reviews for Breathe For Me|
| makarina chapter 23 . 5/16
the end was a little bit ...
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/14
One thing I loved about this story were it's author's notes. (An ending, or a beginning ) They were all very clever. This story was really good, and the relationship seemed real. Nice work.
P.S. "Catch that horizon"
Me: *sees title*
Me: It's so smooth! I'm slipping right out of my chair! :0
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/27/2016
I'm sorry but the line "Wondering what it would be like to be a turtle," solidified your Sanji as my bae. Holy fuck that was great XD
| Stryker2017 chapter 23 . 8/28/2016
Oh my goodness gracious! I just have to say that I absolutely love, love, LOVED this story! This is definitely one of my favorite pairings within the One Piece community and the way you captured these two with your beautiful demonstration of plot elements,imagery, and separate emotional development between Zoro and Sanji just really threw me over the edge (in a good way, of course)! I had to create an account as soon as I read this story just so that I could give you my thanks! I look forward to reading more of your work! Good job!
| yyyy chapter 15 . 8/17/2016
What? Zoro said Sanji has the right to take his life? That zoro's okay with Sanji taking his life? Since when was Zoro ok with someone stepping in his path to become the world's greatest swordsman? It was even stated clearly to Luffy that he would leave if Luffy ever tried to interfere with his dream. And Sanji killing Zoro is interfering with that dream. Why would Zoro be ok with that? One thing Zoro and Luffy have in common is that they would never allow anyone to place a single foot in the way of their path. Whether it's their life saviour or their nakama. I think you butchered zoro's personality here, sorry
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
Wow... The ultimate offense to Zoro... Implying he can't protect himself... Zoro should be angrier... Also he should have been able to sense that chunk of metal before Sanji since he's always first to sense things in the manga... I read one of your stories before and thought characters were too OOC but I decided to try again... Still OOC but better than the last...
| stream hesitates chapter 23 . 5/29/2016
Just finished reading this for the second time, and loved it just as much, if not more, than the first! It was the first ZoSan fic I ever read, and so glad it was. I was introduced to the amazing thing that is one of my favourite pairings! Arg! I'll be coming back to this one soon :) thank you!
| Storm08 chapter 23 . 12/27/2015
Clearly one of the best this pairing has to offer .
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Aaaaaaah! Love this story! Reading through it now for a third time! XD
| HollyWoodFix chapter 23 . 10/25/2015
Such a cute story! My heart almost exploded from all the fluffy goodness. This was definitely one of the best ZoSan stories I've read XD Thank you for such a great story!
| Karmateal chapter 23 . 9/21/2015
so good thank u. i love the way you write it is amazing and i hardly say that.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
Every time I see the end of a section,I can only think, foxy pirates 0_o I REALLY don't like that guys laugh! Lol! XD LOVE how the story develops, and I love how you portray the characters!
| Storm08 chapter 23 . 8/18/2015
Definitely one of my favorite story )
| Storm08 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
This story is just soooooooo good .I loved it !
| kanyon01 chapter 23 . 5/28/2015
FUCKKKKKKKKK THIS WAS SO AMAZING IM LIKE CRYING UGH RIVALRIES THAT TURN TO LOVE KILL ME JUST KILL ME. I LOVED IT, YOU ARE A FANTASTICALLY AMAZING WRITER. DUDE SERIOUSLY THE LIFE SAVING DRAMA HERE TOTALLY LOVED IT. AND THE BANTER BETWEEN THESE TWO IS YESSSS. GREAT JOB BUT YOU PROBABLY ALREADY KNEW THAT!
READ THIS IN ONE SITTING BTW LOL