|Reviews for Beginnings|
| sycce chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
wohoo I love it 3
| DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Nice little story. I really liked the part with Bonnie, though I love John/Abigail a lot. Great job!
| Comment person chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Mmmm, I agree. John/Bonnie is nice, but John/Abigal is...more reasonable.
From, Comment person
P.S. Where is Escuella? The Mexican guy of the group?
| iamTheHood chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
its really well written and easy to understand except the transition from abigail to bonnie wasnt clear, i had to re-read both parts to realize that it was a different point in the story. but its great and i cant wait to read the rest!
| Sleeps in Rain chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Very good :D
I have to admit that I hate John/Abigail and much prefer seeing him with Bonnie, but I enjoyed reading this little snapshot of their past together. I found Abigail less...irritating in your story as opposed to her in-game self, and that's a good thing because I do not like the woman!
Anyhoo, good work.
| Anonymoose chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Judging by this little snippet, you write all three of them very well, so more would be much appreciated in any case. :) However, in my opinion, Bonnie should be the only person shipping John/Bonnie - our hero's a varmint, but he's a married varmint. :P
| The Black Muse chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Please do some John/Bonnie there isn't enough in this fandom.