Reviews for Naruto Sempai
kinokonoko chapter 15 . 9/29/2021
I want to thank you for writing this story, it's really refreshing; either the slowburn romance(friendship?) between naruto and hinata(also hinata and sasuke) and the idea of keeping naruto as humane as possible (in this case not too OP) at least on his age. The idea of hinata calling naruto "senpai" already cute enough, imagine him teaching her heuehueheuh

Also, please take care! Though you already mention to gave permission to whoever want to continue this story, i still think yours are way more refreshing since not many people can do it.

With that, thank you again for the hardwork! Please take care!(2)
lancecomwar chapter 15 . 11/12/2019
I dunno if you’ll read this six years later but I greatly enjoyed this story, I tried doing my own spin on it but I’m just not good enough by my own standards. I understand why you never continued but I still would have loved to know the rest, even if I feel the story would now be less naruto senpai and more regular naruto. Anywho, dunno if anyone will even read this but still, great read
AcidESP chapter 15 . 5/26/2019
good story, I hope you continue, greetings, good luck with your lesson, which by now you have cured hehe, see you, bye!
Monster King chapter 15 . 11/17/2018
Shame you stopped writing the story
Han chapter 3 . 2/1/2018
"...all the rookie 12 are 12..." in this fic?
Since team Gai are late 13 early 14 year olds by the time we met them in the canonical series...
7701DeathlyHalfBloodPrincess chapter 5 . 6/15/2015
Is it me or is there a lot of knnuendos in this story?
Lodot chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
My idea, is to do a "shippuden" version of it. Like, Naruto do that special training for 3 years, and then resume what happened in those years with then... and lots of romance xP
crystal.mora.73 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
WHY? :(
Firefox1000 chapter 15 . 11/16/2014
Awwww, its so sad you stopped this. I think the creators are always harder on themselves and their creations than the audience who enjoys them. Honestly, there has been many good moments and i didnt notice any 'badly written' bits at all. I wish you would continue this story, or at least point me towards others like it because i like the relationship between naruto and hinata in this story. You stuck to their characters well (although you upgraded naruto's character a little bit to account for his slightly different history, with him being a sempai and all). The story always felt enjoyable whilst simulateously making me look forward to the future possibilities - i always had this sense while reading it that something awesome was going to develop. That is, however simple or nondramatic, i felt like their relationship and training sessions would begin changing in an awesome way the more they began to notice each other romantically. Seriously, SO much potential there.
mana chapter 8 . 6/30/2014
your Naruto reminds me of Doctor Who I keep expecting him to pull out a seal screwdriver.
DaOneInDaCorner520 chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
First story in years I've read that happens to be a Hinata fic, and I actually enjoy it. Kudo's to you.
DaOneInDaCorner520 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Missing many periods when the characters speak but otherwise I think it's wonderful so far.
Sipher95 chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
That first chapter, when naruto first enters the classroom, it is almost an EXACT copy of The Doctor in School reunion. I recognized that little scene right away! I will admit, though, that is probably how Naruto would act as a teacher
Contramancer chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
Too right you mean readers... I'm an Overlord, not a minion. Then again, in a way, all authors are overlords...
A Midsummer chapter 15 . 5/24/2013
Ouch. I've enjoyed the story immensely so it's a shame you refused to continue it. Granted, this is probably because this is the first Hinata-centric story I've read that rationally helps her improve her skills and mentality in a reasonable pace. Most of those character development fics often centers around the people in Team Seven, specifically Naruto and/or Sakura. I also liked the twist of Naruto being a senpai despite his age, the possible changes that might have occurred in his absence in the Academy and how he directly influences Hinata. Also, Sasuke. Nice to see he isn't a douche bag.

Hmmm, the unintended grammatical errors were hilariously memorable. No offense meant. It just took me minutes before I realized Machinate and Narrator is actually Hinata and Naruto. Silly me. It took me by surprise that I couldn't help but be amused.

Glad that you shared this with us though. I really hope people would be inspired with this idea and spin their own twists on the plot. The more the merrier.
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