Reviews for Venom
transformice01 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
You're my favorite author, seriously!
DarkValkiria chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Great story, i really enjoy how you got the inspiration for the writing and the lemon is very well done. I also like how you made Naruto listen to them, it added a funny touch to the story. I'd like to see if you could write a story with some chapters instead of only one-shots, i think you have a lovely writing style. Keep it up! )
Kahdejus chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
lol

poor naruto lol hehehe hahah bwahahaha! XD
SakuraUchiha93 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
great story! :D
SasuxSaku4everever chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Hahaha:] The ending was funny! Good story by the way!
bribri13 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
omg this story is SEXY! i love sasuke and sakura! the passion in this story was AMAZING! an this was ur first story wow! im looking forward to reading ur other stories, i think ur a amazing writer! oh yea how old is sakura and sasuke in this story? and i love the ending with naruto "inconsiderate assholes" i was laughin so hard! :)and when naruto found out sasuke was fucking sakura omg i could imagine what his face looked liked! lol (sorri for my inapporiate language) :) anyway great job on this story! yay for u! :D
OctobersAutumn chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
omg it's awesome you rock :D and the ending and the beginning, they are sooooo cute 3 I love it...I think I'm going to re-read it like...now :D and I totally agree come is way better than cum...cum sounds so like nineties porn well at least to me :D
Angelv98 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I would have to say my favorite part about this story is in the end with Naruto. It made me laugh. :)
NouchNouch chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Congratulations !

I can't believe this is your first story O It's so good !

Your lemon is...huuum P Perfect !

Keep writing stories like this one ! :D
Kanryu chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
You write, amazingly. The plot was great, and the transitions were smoothly entwined. I haven't read something like this in a LONGGGGGGGGG while :D You just made my first few days of August! :)
pei-chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
You had me at the edge of my seat since the moment I started reading! I was giggling and shrieking the whole time. Oh my gosh, the plot and the execution was excellent!

I am now an official fan. Please, you have to write more - smut if possible - of this fandom in the future!
Beeeee chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Ohhhh i think that last Naruto bit just made that story :')

'Inconsiderate assholes'
The madness speaks chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
poor naturo lol
tomatoqueen chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
:D delicious all the way through
chewing.on.PEARLS chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Omg, your first time? Wtf, this was one of the most amazing smut fics I've ever read! It wasn't too dirty that it makes you feel bad for reading it, it was just right! It def wasn't PWP because there WAS a point! THE GIRL WAS GONNA DIE! Great job! Awesome, way better than my first time writing smut O.o that was a disaster :/ Anyway! This was awesome, and I hope to read more of your work in the near future!

Haha, "come" is classier :) This was a very classy smut fic and I liked it :P

-chewingonpearls (SAYURI)
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