Reviews for Venom
tomatoqueen chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
:D delicious all the way through
chewing.on.PEARLS chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Omg, your first time? Wtf, this was one of the most amazing smut fics I've ever read! It wasn't too dirty that it makes you feel bad for reading it, it was just right! It def wasn't PWP because there WAS a point! THE GIRL WAS GONNA DIE! Great job! Awesome, way better than my first time writing smut O.o that was a disaster :/ Anyway! This was awesome, and I hope to read more of your work in the near future!

Haha, "come" is classier :) This was a very classy smut fic and I liked it :P

-chewingonpearls (SAYURI)
RandiBlackWing chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Incredible! The humor at the end was a great touch.
Nina Morenos chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
CYRA1104 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I love it! 3
ForsakenKalika chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
hikari98 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Reaallyy nice. Very exciting. And the last past was a great laugh.

I hope you'd make another one of these creations.
Ms.Valkyrie13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
You should really make an epilouge! XD

poor poor naruto
Kaze and Kiba chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Haha, a bug bite...good one. Cute and funny and hot. Thanks for the fic. K&K
RecklessXRelentlessXRuthenia chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Sexy for a first! Loved it!
ju1i3Oh chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
hahah! Poor Naruto!XD Loved it though! :)
mechakitty chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
nice !
pinkstainedcheeks chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
omg seriously this is your first ficcy?


and i abso love the ending!

lol! naruto!

"inconsiderate assholes"

satoshii chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
If this is your first fanfic, then I am impressed. I can't wait for your future pieces.
Hana-Taisho chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
OMG, that last part with Naruto. I AM Sitll laughing my but off!

you did a wonderful job, and i like you explanion on why you spelled it come instead of Cum. and it still was a good smut story i love to read and enjoy.

thank you very much for the wonferful read.

good luck on your up comming challanges in life.
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