Reviews for Venom
Angelv98 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I would have to say my favorite part about this story is in the end with Naruto. It made me laugh. :)
NouchNouch chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Congratulations !

I can't believe this is your first story O It's so good !

Your lemon is...huuum P Perfect !

Keep writing stories like this one ! :D
Kanryu chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
You write, amazingly. The plot was great, and the transitions were smoothly entwined. I haven't read something like this in a LONGGGGGGGGG while :D You just made my first few days of August! :)
pei-chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
You had me at the edge of my seat since the moment I started reading! I was giggling and shrieking the whole time. Oh my gosh, the plot and the execution was excellent!

I am now an official fan. Please, you have to write more - smut if possible - of this fandom in the future!
Beeeee chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Ohhhh i think that last Naruto bit just made that story :')

'Inconsiderate assholes'
The madness speaks chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
poor naturo lol
tomatoqueen chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
:D delicious all the way through
chewing.on.PEARLS chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Omg, your first time? Wtf, this was one of the most amazing smut fics I've ever read! It wasn't too dirty that it makes you feel bad for reading it, it was just right! It def wasn't PWP because there WAS a point! THE GIRL WAS GONNA DIE! Great job! Awesome, way better than my first time writing smut O.o that was a disaster :/ Anyway! This was awesome, and I hope to read more of your work in the near future!

Haha, "come" is classier :) This was a very classy smut fic and I liked it :P

-chewingonpearls (SAYURI)
RandiBlackWing chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Incredible! The humor at the end was a great touch.
Nina Morenos chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Freaking AWESOME! LOVE IT!
CYRA1104 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I love it! 3
ForsakenKalika chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
3
hikari98 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Reaallyy nice. Very exciting. And the last past was a great laugh.

I hope you'd make another one of these creations.
Ms.Valkyrie13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
You should really make an epilouge! XD

poor poor naruto
Kaze and Kiba chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Haha, a bug bite...good one. Cute and funny and hot. Thanks for the fic. K&K
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