|Reviews for Oblivious|
| Kendra PJO chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Good point! I like this, because it starts out by saying usually she doesn't think deep thoughts (true) but then goes on to prove a point (obliviousness) through deep thoughts. But if it had been anyone else's POV, it would have been much different. You make it work, though!
You use a LOT of commas sometimes. It's not good/bad/otherwise, and they always follow the rules. I just wanted to make you aware of it.
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
I have to agree. Rewarding by not killing is a perfect way to drive demigods in the waiting arms of Kronis.
| not someone of importance chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Thalia, for once was dead right. I completly agree with her. Where did this idea come from? You nailed Thalia perfectly.
Go get a muffin.
| Bloody White Rabbit chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Like the story!
Although, not to be picky I just want to help, the part right at the beginning with "smarter than Percy...loath to admit it)" the "there" afterwords is incorrect it should be "they're". There are a couple other places that just need quick spell and grammar checks, but I did like the story and Thalia reflection on why the gods shouldn't be surprised and such.