|Reviews for The Plan|
| Jayel Potter chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
your writing style is so beautiful. loved reading it!
| SophieNewman chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Golly gee. I LOVED this. As usual. This was so hilarious! And awesome. And... God, I don't have words for this. I really, really love it. :D
| caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
"I know he never asked me out that many times, but he was always paying me compliments and dropping hints about how we would be perfect together." - I LOVE this! I really dislike this popular fanon trope of James asking Lily out 500 times. So, I like your idea more. Him complimenting her and dropping hints and trying to flirt with her but only managing to make a fool of himself.
I also love how your James is still flawrd, even though he grew up a bit and matured and all. He's still stubborn. He's still cheeky.
And awww, they're both nervous and they blush. I just love it.
This is such a cute fic.
| Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Awwww, this is so cute! I love that James knew, he knew the whole time, that wonderful, adorable prat.
No, but really, the way you described how James' arrogance melted into confidence and everything... was perfect.
I really like this one-shot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Love it...its awesome! And cute 3
| thekbeat chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Bravo! *claps* Three cheers for Jily!
| Encypher chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Wow, he was quick to call Lily love. I guess though after chasing her for so long it's understandable. I liked seeing Lily fumble with trying to work out if James still fancied her.
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Aw this was so funny and perfect and real :)
| papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
So, I've read this story a long time ago an forgot to review. And, then I couldn't find it anywhere and I was so annoyed because I really liked it. (I would google things like "Lily pushes James in the suit of armour" and stuffs like that but nothing!) I almost gave up on ever finding the story, but then I accidentally stumbled upon one of your stories and... I was so happy! :)
Anyway, I forgot my old account mail, username, password...all of it, so I had to make a new one and now I'm reviewing all my favourite stories... God, look at me babbling and I still haven't said anything... Sorry...
I like how you write Lily and James. You don't exaggerate . Lily's not a bitch who screams at James and hex him all the time. And James is not some Greek god, gorgeous, tanned, muscular stud that leaves all of the female population of Hogwarts breathless. They're so ordinary, and normal, and cute... This whole ignoring game is so typical when you're a teenager. I also love how they talked about everything before they kissed. Not that I mind them kissing before they talk, lol (I LOVE to see them kissing, doesn't matter how or when or where), but I think this was really a good start for their future relationship (that will save the wizarding world!): clear all the misunderstandings first.
Ok, I think it's about time I stop spamming your review box. Sorry, I got carried away... Quality J/L stories do that to me... :)
I hope we'll see more of your J/L one (or more - even better) shots. ;)
| Sparkly Faerie chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
...I've read this before. I know I have. The question is, why did I not review it? Why is it also not on my favourites list?
I think this might actually have been the fic that (at least partially) inspired Solidarity. I remember there was a fic (it was either this one or one very similar to it) that made me think, "I want to write one of these".
I love it. It's fully as hell. And James is a treat in it, too; kind of teasing and infuriating, but still nice enough not to get into trouble for it. There was also a line that really set me off. One of Sirius's lines. The spiel about the 'scenery'.
And lol. That scene with the armour. XD
It's after 4am. Everything is funnier. Lol.
But no, seriously, I remember giggling like a maniac the first time I read it, too. This is one of those fics that I'll end up going back and reading again and again.
Small issue; you referred to James as a 'she' once. "Even if he didn't fancy her, it was clear that she enjoyed her company as a friend. Being mates would be better than nothing, she supposed." I'm thinking it was meant to be 'he enjoyed'.
Anyway, this is a good one, definitely a favourite. I wish I had an excuse for not reviewing earlier, but all I can come up with is that I read it in the middle of a reading spree and I was practically eating the stories up at that point and reviewed very few of them.
| brilliant incandescence chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Oh, I love the fact that James just knew, bloody brilliant that boy.
| BalloonsInTheSky chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This is one of the cutest James-Lily stories I've read. Love it! :)
| Captain Severus Padfeet chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Awe that was so fun! _ Just thought u should know I enjoyed it a lot.
| InsanityRockz07 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
I'll make this extremely short...
It was absolutely fantastic! hah!
I love it!
The series of events were also good. It wasn't confusing like some other fanfics I've read. This one's a really good read.
| the.chosen.one96 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I really enjoyed this story, it was so cute! :)