|Reviews for Darkrai's Journal|
| ThereisnoSyntaxhere chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
Arrrgh, Y U no update! C'mon, I've been waiting to see more for a long time! This is one of the few good Darkrai stories on right now, you need to continue before they crappy Mary Sue romances take Darkrai away from us!
| Darkri fan chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
Ha take that baron... Man I HATE that guy. Go darkri great story
| DragonBlade152 chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
I like this story. You're doing a good job of Darkrai's personality as far as I'm concerned. Of course, with me just about anything goes, but still, nice job. Anyway, Darkrai as a human? I actually started writing a story where that happened, but I never finished it. Happy writing! :)
| BrainlessCrow chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
I have an darkrai into a person named ray.
| Marx soul chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
When Darkrai's body numbed I think his writing looked like mr. saturns (from earthbound and mother 3).
| xLL-Ax chapter 4 . 3/22/2011
Continue! I love it, its so funny xD But there is also a story, which is good too :)
| Kawaii Stella chapter 4 . 1/11/2011
I love this story! I really hope you update soon because this story puts a smile on my face. Very funny.
| Snowskeeper chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Darkrai needs a misunderstoodness buddy. I suggest Dusknoir.
| Kenpokid chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Darkrai is more of a loner really. Try to incorperate that. Also, he wouldn't write anything at all, although I suppose you gotta have him write it so you HAVE a story :P
| Yrane chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
I love this chapter to. Sorry I didn't reveiw earlier but I was stranded in Germany without a computer. Heh heh heh Darkri really is evil isn't he? But then again he's sort of unpredictable. My faverouite part in this chapter is this,
'...The dreams are mainly about money, drugs, family members, or IT...'
And I think you shoul go into nightmares some more.
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 3 . 8/5/2010
"By the time sunset had arrived I had two good-sized bruises on my caller where a trainers Pokémon attempted to bite my head off"
"By the time sunset had arrived, I had two good-sized bruises on my collar where a trainers' Pokémon attempted to bite my head off."
But other than that, that was funny. I don't like Baron. He's stupid and arrogant. XD
| Divinehearts chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
I always thought about that myself, just how old Darkrai was. I figured he was there from the beginning, as you described. I love how everything so far has been right on the mark, keep it up! Idea wise for new chapters, what would happen if Cresselia decided to pay a visit to old Darky? Or what if team Galactic/Rocket heard about the legendary living in Alamos and tried to capture Darkrai... there are so many possibilities.
| lady of the wilds chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
great chapter, you wanted ideas for your story well you mentioned that alice got a job at a daycare, i would love to see what happens if alice took him there one day to meet the kids... just a thought hope you update soon
| Yrane chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
I love this chapter and love the idea's you're coming up with, especially the references to stuff like,
'Even if my body dies, the gatekeeper Giratina must give me another body, so I can continue to do my work here on earth.
That is what happened to me when Dialga and Palkia destroyed my last body.'
But idea-wise I'm not sure, if I was writing this everyone would be dead already so it's a good idea not to get ideas from me. But I will try to think of ideas and if I get any I will post them in a review.
Still, keep up the good work:)
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
"Tonio was done sweeping and tending to the plant's around the house."
Ooh... "plant's" is a greengrocers' apostrophe. That's a definite no-no and one of my major pet peeves. It's like you're saying "plants is". It's just plants.
But other than that, it looks nice. ;D