Reviews for He Couldn't
NormalityIsNonexistent chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This really could have happened during the year that never was.
wolfdefender01 chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
love this idea!

update soon!
LovinJackson chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
oh this is good. I like it alot hehe. Please tell me you're continuing this soon :)
Indigo1100 chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
Wow! Great story! There's a lot of stories with the idea that the Master will used Jack's team against him, but yours was very unique- I liked how the Master had set up the beginning conflict for Jack, and also how Jack thought of Alice and his grandson as well. And I liked how you then showed it from Ianto's perspective, explored his experiences, the psychology of it, from being so tired to seeing horrors and being glad for unconsciousness, to the idea that the guards probably could have beaten him when the Master wasn't there, but didn't. And also I like the thing with Tosh and Owen. Thanks!
IronSpockMaster chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
Wow this is so good! poor ianto...
SheWroteTheWords chapter 2 . 8/1/2010
Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, I'vebeen too restless to sit down and actually read fanfiction. lol! Anyway, another great chapter. Ianto is so amazingly strong!
Anne Schaeffer chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
OoOo shivers ran down my spine. Good job. Update as soon as you can D
Kiraclara chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Poor Ianto and the team. Wowl..
Lisa chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
That was heartbreaking (really want some tissues right now;-))

But an intereseting idea nontheless 'm quite exciteted how it will go on so please keep updating!
JolinarJackson chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Pretty sad but well written. I'm interested in where you'll be going with this story.
Anne Schaeffer chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
wow. please update as soon as you can! sad but very good )
Kiraclara chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Wow. I actually had a little tear well up. I can wait for more.
SheWroteTheWords chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Wow. That was amazing. It was short but got so much in there. You wrote Jack so well in my opinion, appearing...weak almost. Like by destroying everything Jack loved the Master broke him D:. Great fanfic, hauntingly written.
AnnoyingLittlePixiexxx chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Our poor boys!

Loved the comment:

It had taken the end of the world as they knew it to bring those two together.

about Owen and Tosh. They are a great couple!
IronSpockMaster chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
O_o evil master. i like how jack's usually so strong, but you've put him in a position where he's weak.