Reviews for Colliding Clocks
Bridget Friste chapter 4 . 7/6/2011
oooooooooooooohhhhhh :D *exciting!* i think about fainted that was so adorable!
x-HotMess chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
I loved your analysis of seeing memories not how they are, but how we are. You truly captured the 'emotional dysfunction' that everybody faces when overcome with their own self-awareness. This is a beautifully written story, despite the rather hurried profession of feelings, and I can't wait to read more of it. I hope you'll delve in the dreamscape, not just remain in reality, to further the A/A relationship.
Kats02980416 chapter 4 . 12/22/2010
Omg, what a cliffhanger and everything was going well for Ariadne and Arthur. The realization of their feelings for each other. The absolute truth of their time spent together, finally coming together. It felt like both were afraid to admit those budding feelings, like they were on the fence each anticipating a move like chess pieces on a chess board. I love how they both have come to the point that they mean something more delicate, precious and important to each other. That the risk is great of letting their hearts be together, but wont lose the chance to do so and they did something about that. It seems like the cliffhanger can be Arthur's twin brother? Maybe? I love all the details you write in your story's on Arthur and Ariadne's reactions to each other. I love how they each found each other in this line of business. A dangerous business it is, but the risks of being in a relationship. Its strange to see Arthur so out of control being around Ariadne. Its like she brings about this other side of Arthur for only her to see. I don't think Arthur is one to just let anyone in know personal details of his life. But she's become very valuable to him. I loved how absorbed and attached he is to Ariadne. And I love how they do each complete each other and get each other so well.
Kats02980416 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
I'm loving this story every chapter that escalates it. I love how Arthur and Ariadne are doing their part in sharing a piece of their life that was at one time an important factor that each has made them the person they are today. It was interesting for Arthur to get a bit envious of Cobb and his time sharing with Ariadne. Its like Arthur wants to know everything about Ariadne, but doesn't want to share her with anyone else. I think Arthur is a bit envious that Cobb and Ariadne share the same skill in creating amazing architectural infinite possibilities that he feels a bit left out in that department. But I think the differences is what makes Arthur and Ariadne work so well together, he a Point Man with details and her with the creativity of being the Architect. Its like they can keep each other in check with each other between reality and in dreaming. There is a budding attraction and chemistry that is being truly tested between the two, but to act on that feeling, who will be the one to bring the walls down and reveal that fact. Going beyond the boundaries of friendship and teamates, is a bit scary, letting someone in your life in a more profound level is challenging. Are Arthur and Ariadne willing to take a chance at love and risk being together in a business such as the one they are in? Cant wait for more to come in your awesome story.
Kats02980416 chapter 2 . 12/22/2010
I love how Arthur has come to care for Ariadne. That gesture he pulled off so he wont lose her for good, its so unlike his character. He seems to normally have his emotions in check, all details in hand, have it all planned out, organized, but with Ariadne, its different. Its like he's impressed with her in general. She has grown on him and he cant get enough of her. Its like he wants to know all about her and be with her. Its like he's fighting his own rational thinking against what his heart desires. Looks like the heart is winning. Ariadne, seems to be surprised by Arthur's actions. Its like Arthur got used to having Ariadne around in his life. Its like the moment she breezed through his life the first time coming in for this Fisher Inception job, its like he starting living, really living. For the longest time, he seemed like a loner, living his life collecting details for jobs but never once getting involved or attached to anything of it. Ariadne, seems to have stolen his heart.
Kats02980416 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I'm liking the developments of your Ariadne/Arthur plot already. I love that Ariadne and Arthur are so much caught up in each other that they can face the reality of leaving the other. The last few weeks working together, have brought them closer and the kiss they shared in the dream, something delicate. I don't think Arthur, being the Point Man, can let this go, let her go. For once, in his life, he's let go of self-control and planning, and it seems letting his heart make his decisions and all rationality out the window. Its like he cant stop thinking of her and the same goes for Ariadne. Afraid to lose each other for good. Afraid to let go.
gpeach6 chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
potatoing chapter 4 . 12/13/2010

or maybe i did. or maybe i just didn't really care so much cuz i hadn't seen inception until yesterday night.

not that i don't care about your writing! i just don't really notice the ones where i don't know what they're about.


uhmm, i know you don't really update fics anymore, but UPDATE THIS ONE UBER SOON. (:

haha, i had one too many oreos. i'm a little hyper. that's why there's a lot of caps.

and mmmmmmmm. joseph gordon-levitt. soooooooo hot. like, he's yummier than oreos. OREOS, ADA.

yes. even more than ben barnes.

impossiblypossible chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
LOOOOOVED THIS seriously! can't wait for more! i need more A/A :D :D update soon pleeease
mysong chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
The dialogue is just... so *them*.

The pauses, the thoughts, I can see how the scene would be acted (oh, JGL and Ellen, XD) Those lines can be said out loud and not sound fake. It's very real and the suspense and waiting between them is tangible.

Thank you. I don't think you'll ever disappoint.]

Epic-Azn-Failure chapter 4 . 12/12/2010
Great story so far. Can't wait to see who this man is. Hope you update soon.
Queenofinsanity chapter 4 . 12/12/2010

I'm glad to see another update here. I love the simplicity of this story. Being the kind of person who does in fact spend long hours in diners with people on a regular basis, it's strangely comfortable.

I can't wait to see what's coming next.
oddball15 chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
Please continue this. Pretty please with sugar and hot fudge and sprinkles on top.

I just saw Inception last night and have been dying of Arthur/Ariadne love. I adore this. I haven't read anything by you in such a long time, and I've just been reminded of how freaking talented you are. Those last paragraphs of dialougue are wonderful. I can't even explain how much I loved the words and style you used. When he's explaining that "we never see things as they are, but as we are" I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I love the intensity and the newness they're both experiencing.

You are awesome. For real.
xxxiheartdancexxx chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
geez, i love youre writing.

thank you for gracing us with an arthur/ariadne story! they are my newest favorite couple and finding good stories about them in difficult so thanks for providing us readers with a story of substance and quality!
Soldier 24601 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I was impressed that you used 9/11 in this. I still remember where I was that day. And yes, I was afraid of flying after that. Then I started doing it way too often for my liking, and I kind of got used to it. Anyway, I like it so far.
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