|Reviews for Hunted|
| a.brief.dalliance chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I love how you portray cloud, still a little shy and socially awkward but also determined and forceful. Love all your stories, hope you write again soon!
| Seelenspiel chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
There's just one word for this fiction: perfect.
| randomteenager chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Ah, well done well done. I love the juxtaposition of Cloud's "angles" against Tifa's "curves." Lovely word choice there. This was a nice story, good use of the present tense. The development of the plot was nice, I think the characters were nicely in character. The intimate moment was beautifully written, subtly detailed, tasteful, and ultimately romantic. You're very good at that!
Another nice story. Keep up the good work! :)
| Majestic-Space-Duck chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I read this story a while back, but decided to come back and read it again. Great one shot. Don’t ever stop writing – you obviously enjoy it and you’re brilliant at it.
| DivineKitten chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I love it! Their relationship in this story is just so sweet, it made my heart melt reading it. Literally. Thanks for the fic!
| Raven Crimson chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Absolutely loved how hot this was. I'm a very hardcore Cloti, but in a way that makes sense. Nothing irks me more than when they're just paired up without any details on HOW. You made their realizations and resolution believable, and I do love watching Cloud take initiative in a convincing manner, which is actually quite hard to do.
Well written piece through and through. Loved it wholeheartedly.
| truthlieslovestars chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
| Sekihara Tae chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Can I just say how much I love you for detailing how Tifa can be dense, too? 'Cause she can be, and - according to Case of Tifa - she was, and I do love you for writing this. Cloud made mistakes, but it's very very refreshing to see someone acknowledge that Tifa wasn't exactly paying attention either. ;) Plus, it's all wrapped up in a nice hot romance with a side helping of fluff: what's not to like? Nothing, that's what! This was terrific. Thanks for writing!
| shikonnotama16 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I really love your stories !:D Especially the ones about Cloud and Tifa.
Please write moreee! :D
| mom calling chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
You knocked me into orbit again with this one. I was afraid to read it because I have an anaphylactic reaction to the word "angst", which is half of what you labeled this story. Howsomever, I did some calming breathing and plunged in and am so glad I did. It's very juicy, but it is thoughtful, too. You love words: the fretting fingers. And you know how to use them: "What if,...I came to...covered in your blood?" "That was how I died." These two are so magical together and you've got them just right. Not emo-foolish, not proud-dense, but in love and afraid of tempting fate by being so. There are days when it's the same for me, and it's been many, many years. A delicious trembly, state-of-heart... You crafted a lovely, powerful memory here, Fenikkusuken. thx mc
| ayannaaki chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
*Cries* I WISH this would really happen! (Not that we'd see it in this detail, but they allowed a kiss in FFX so they should have one here.) They should make another film, even if it's 20 mins long or another game or even a book or anime episode. Anything would be better than nothing as long as it featured Cloud and Tifa admitting their feeling's for each other : Great job, well done x
| Lana Ves chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
i thoroughly enjoyed this fic! it was believable and well written! very good! thanks!
| walkingdisastersharkchild chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
that was amazing.
:D really sweet and sexy aha
| vLuna chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Beautiful story It was good to see Cloud taking things into his own hands lol. Loved it!
| ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Hey, I think I've seen you around LJ here and there. I didn't know you were here, too.
Anyway, I loved this piece. Cloud can really be an animal when he wants, huh? The passion in here was just beautiful... Bravo!