| Reviews for First and Ten |
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  Guest chapter 36 . 8/27/2021 Are you coming back to continue this story? |
 Luvreading67 chapter 33 . 5/27/2021 Aww so glad they sorted out their feelings at last |
| Luvreading67 chapter 30 . 5/27/2021 Awwww |
| Luvreading67 chapter 28 . 5/27/2021 He should have spanked both of you for setting him up... |
| Luvreading67 chapter 27 . 5/27/2021 So,, have I got it right..Paul is a sort of step son to Charlie, Paul had the hits got Bella, but Charlie saw him off,,so Paul has festered over this.. Is Paul just the informant over where Bella was,, or was he in the house at all, and does Paul know who is Embrys brother |
| Luvreading67 chapter 24 . 5/27/2021 Well, I’ve only ever seen clips of Twilight, and only from reading fan fiction, learned a bit more about the Cullens,, But,,, if the Cullens are vampires, why didn’t they use their powers to find Bella,,, Am I missing something here,,, Glad Bella is waking up,, |
| Luvreading67 chapter 23 . 5/27/2021 How come no one has got or mentioned the brother...? |
| Luvreading67 chapter 21 . 5/27/2021 So who got Embrys brother... I thought Embrys brother shot him.. I’m confused, But glad they got Bella out |
| Luvreading67 chapter 15 . 5/26/2021 OMG,,,just knew he was going to get Bella,,,hope you get her out of,it |
| Luvreading67 chapter 14 . 5/26/2021 My nerves are on edge,,, |
| Luvreading67 chapter 13 . 5/26/2021 Soo. Do we find out who leaked Bella and Edwards photo to,the press ? |
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/1/2021 thank u for that ending now i dont have to kill edward lol |
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/1/2021 OMG what a fucking insensitive bastard hes worried about his sex life while bella is in hell close to death is he for real he should be offering to give up everything just to get her back would he rather her die if she wont go back in the playroom i say again edward doesnt deserve bella how as the story writer can u not see this i really hope this isnt a hea which i wanted at the beggining but bella deserves better even jake is a better option... ok maybe not but not edward |
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/1/2021 omg edwards not even out looking for bella hes given up lucky she has her dad edward doesnt deserve her if it was up to him he was just leaving her to be killed and tortured while wallowing in self pity what a selfish bastard i dont care how much hes hurting i wouldnt stop searching for a loved one til i found them ever, I know the way this story is going to go but edward doesnt deserve bella and charlie shouldnt allow his daughter to b so easily forgotton by edward |
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/1/2021 its a little creepy using christian greys creepy obsesssion with brunettes it only bothers me as i am brunette but luckiy a little old for there taste at 43 lol im not accusing u of taking it from fsog just wanted to note the parallel that made me giggle loving this story hope bellas saved |