Reviews for Freak of Nature
s.k.f.f.f chapter 19 . 9/25
Man, please update
woodzrox chapter 19 . 9/23
Woo! Anarchy! Smash the system! Thanks for the chapter too.
woodzrox chapter 18 . 9/23
Ha, That ending is like a tiny sized zerg rush.
woodzrox chapter 9 . 9/23
If he's in Nundu form, can his mouth/jaw still extend beyond normal? Is his tongue still like a snakes?
woodzrox chapter 4 . 9/22
Very nice, he would be pretty powerful if he gained some of the abilities from a mantis or pistol shrimp, much later in the story though...
Guest chapter 19 . 9/2
And this fanfic has just turned cringeworthy and fucking terrible
musme chapter 19 . 9/1
I love it so much
Faery66 chapter 19 . 8/11
Hope to read more soon.

Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
Yet another story abandoned by this author. Pity. The story was good.
Ibskib chapter 19 . 8/5
leapord - leopard
Ibskib chapter 15 . 8/4
Thomas Marvalo Riddle - Tom Marvolo Riddle
(otherwise the anagram wouldn't fit)

that met his eyes - that reached his eyes

where flowing through - were flowing through

savoir - savior

debachal - debacle

quack-pot - crackpot

Madame Pomfery - Madam Pomfrey
Ibskib chapter 13 . 8/4
not to bad - not too bad

on the lamb - on the lam

Harry's shorter person - Harry's shorter stature

sever look - severe look

Their all dead - They're all dead

is an objective word - is a relative word
(otherwise the sentence doesn't really make sense)

had purchase - had purchased

ever being fix - ever being fixed

laying on - lying on

Nundu's - Nundus
Ibskib chapter 12 . 8/4
Kreecher - Kreacher

Cat's - Cats

Nundu's - Nundus

brother's - brothers
Ibskib chapter 8 . 8/4
you shouldn't use an apostrophe when it is a plural form:

tornado's - tornadoes
Dursley's - Dursleys
Cat's - Cats
Nundu's - Nundus
Charlie0925 chapter 19 . 7/8
AMAZING WRITING here honey! I am loving this fic!

Hmm, regarding ideas for targets, I'd opt for the human trafficking gangs, terrorist groups, seriously vile corrupt politicians, etc. I also like the idea of using a modified version of the Black's "pied piper curse" to hit these groups in mass waves then drop/portkey them into active volcanoes, hence, spreading the news quickly that crime, etc does not pay.
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