|Reviews for My Captain|
| FrankieHS chapter 7 . 9/7
I just read this story again, and again I'm blown away by how you write these characters, especially Kirk, Spock, and McCoy. Perfectly is how you write them, completely how I see them as well. Thanks for putting it into such lovely words.
| last1stnding chapter 7 . 6/2
Any well written story that centers on my favorite Captain (Shatner style) is welcome but this collection was doubly pleasing. Chapter Six had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Powerful stuff and I loved 'seeing' the story from other viewpoints, like Uhura and Chekov. Loved the protective crew and the Vulcan keeper of all things Kirk kept safe.
I'm a little late in doing so but I'm happy to put this one on the favorites list. Thanks for a great read.
| Mellia Bee chapter 6 . 11/29/2022
Every. Single. Chapter of this is pure magic. I always forget how many of my favorite stories of yours are encapsulated in this one fic, and then I reread it and discover the magic all over again. I WOULD have reviewed every single chapter, but FFN doesn’t let someone comment more than once per chapter, so I’ll just do the best I can here.
Self-sacrifice is a powerful element, as are love and loyalty. You explore all these themes most satisfactorily here, using humor and pathos, hurt/comfort and whump and fluff. And I love it so much. Everything from McCoy and Spock rescuing him from the neural inhibitors right down to the entire crew running their ship ragged trying to get their captain to safety—it’s all absolute perfection. And that last chapter—I am simply in awe at your writing skills. You raise the stakes to immense heights, wind the reader up until they’re on the edge of their seat, twist our heartstrings around your keyboard—it’s masterful. Absolutely masterful.
| Mellia Bee chapter 1 . 11/28/2022
Oh wow—I wasn’t going to review individual chapters this time through, but man—this chapter (the reading to Jim in a coma chapter) is one of my all-time favorites. So so so good alslfjakslsk! The FEELZ!
| InsomniaFlarrow chapter 7 . 8/24/2021
I loved this so much! The characters were all on point, and the mix of both fluff and angst was exactly what I needed! This was very sweet and I really enjoyed it, especially all the Kirk and Spock scenes. Overall, your writing style is awesome and this was so good!
| Lela chapter 7 . 9/7/2020
I enjoyed this character study! Good job showing Kirk interact with his crew and highlighting his relationship with Spock.
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2020
Absolutely fab, please write more,Shatner portrayal of Kirk is brilliant, and he's sexy as hell!
| RavenLilyRose chapter 7 . 7/13/2020
Beautiful, amazing, I'm crying.
I love your writing, and this has got to be one of my very favorite things you have written. You have a wonderful grasp of the characters of each of the crew, and I love how you use them.
Thank you for sharing this truly amazing story, it's definitely one I will read again.
| Supermoi chapter 4 . 8/13/2019
*sniff sniff* :( Oh darn my poor hearth... That was well done...
| Supermoi chapter 3 . 8/13/2019
DAWWWWWWW This was just too darn adorable for words! :D
| Supermoi chapter 2 . 8/13/2019
I think I almost chewed a hole through my cheek reading through this one... God this was intense and it was a right mess at the same time... and a reminder why Kirk has always been my favorite Star Trek Captain ever.
| Beyondtoday chapter 6 . 7/28/2019
I was kind of sitting on the edge of my chair for a moment when the crystals started failing.
| Adalas chapter 6 . 7/26/2019
I don't know what to say... this fic is so awesome, very well writing, the characters IC... I love how you describe the link between Jim and his crew, Bones and Spock. I love how you show Spock's human part with few words.
Thank you so much for sharing this story !
| BrokenKestral chapter 5 . 2/8/2019
Sometimes loyalty is given; sometimes it is earned; and sometimes, in the case of your Captain Kirk, his consideration, bravery, wit, and own loyalty demand it, and none could refuse.
| BrokenKestral chapter 3 . 2/8/2019
...facepalm. Because Jim would learn the Vulcan nerve pinch that way, at least when he was younger.