|Reviews for His Voice|
| Grissina chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I love when Parker realizes about this kind of things. It's like seeing a kid learn. And she is true about Eliot, he'll be there for all of them even if he says he wont, he will because he cares. (Hardison learnt that one on the ice man job XD).
Keep writing about them, you succeed quite well.
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
that was great loved it
| icebreather chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Hey, I just wanted to encourage you in your writing efforts. Especially for a newbie, you have a good sense for how a story should flow. You also show a nice eye for what character bits might be interesting to explore. And your grammar and sentence structure are decent, which unfortunately can't be said of far too many fanfic writers ...
So I hope you keep going! You've got enough talent that polishing it up and using it further should be worthwhile. :-)
| PaNiCiNgReBeLaNgElS chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
i enjoyed it
| Bryn Elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
I liked this a lot! I really loved the idea of Eliot helping Parker move something heavy. Very realistic and very cute!
For someone who is supposedly new to writing, this is very good(: