Reviews for The Breeder
SappyCrap chapter 5 . 11/1/2010
I LIKE

KEEP WRITING
What a B1tch chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Aw, poor Alexis . . .

Oh, wait, we don't care.

Honestly, this is boring, your writing sucks, your character is a blatant Mary Sue, and you can't write dialogue to save your life. Do you know what grammar is, sweetie? You don't? Oh, I'm sorry. Then you should go back to second grade.

Delete this or get a beta reader.

-Lover of Gone