Reviews for Invader Zim: Tak Returns And Some Lies To Be Told
AZalmega chapter 25 . 4/9/2016
Your skill is a bit rusty and you should expand your writing into a mapped out maze rather than a cluster pit party. Although your skill work for the Invader Zim series, I would just recommend you try out some Zootopia fanfic for now. It will help nap you supporters and refresh you skills. You will be reborn after this.
mrfire290 chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
really wow its the same fucking chapter in every part what the fuck
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1/2015
It was so goooooooood I finished in 4 hours
True Support chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
this is just wrong man please change the rating to t or m
i want more chapter 25 . 6/1/2014
idea make about two chapters where they have to get married or something
irken winter chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
pleases i beg you please continue the story i love this story and i beg for more just one million pleases
irken winter chapter 24 . 1/29/2014
i have an idea continue whats happened like write taks reaction
invader essie chapter 25 . 4/15/2013
hey i know a way to continue the story try putting what happens after that scene like what does tak do and feel for what zim did and was she able to forgive him. or what about whats happening with maroon and lyn i mean do they go or stay. do the tallests let tak stay with zim forever. will tak act like that again. or what about will zim do to her what she did in the skool when they were both in mimi or gir come into skool like mimi did just before

like you know like a scene joint on im only helping because on this whole website its rated my second best and i would like to continue reading on i mean it wasnt at all bad i say sometimes it was funny
deadaccount19 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Dear god, so many words. O.O
Lucky Ryuujin chapter 25 . 9/21/2012
I am confused. Is this the final chapter or isn't it? If so, I eagerly await the sequel.
cryptologicalMystic chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Okay, this has to win some kind of award for story length. Nine hundred thousand words? That's just amazing.
RayAndBadRay chapter 2 . 3/26/2012
Why the fuck is every chapter the fuckig same wtf is the point of that asss hoolle fix your shit grr
tak lover chapter 2 . 6/10/2011
here is the next chapter idea its bigger now:Tak wakes up or comes and gets to herself and she feels like she was fingered with a huge finger the she goes nuts and screams"WHO HUMPED ME!" Then Dib,lyn,and the tallest scream,"ZIM DID IT!"Tak tries to kill him but he runs down to the lab and wont let tak in a day later he goes back up tak is calm now but still mad then Zim says,"Tak im very sorry but your dad told me to so you would calme down."then lyn says"tak,he is telling the truth". then tak says"im sorry for tryinng to kill you zim i just didn't wont to be a mom now it might happen tthen dib appesrs and says "ha ha ha you had to hump tak i also recorded it he he he". db go away before i let gir eat you!" dib runs fast and gir {and} mimi chases him everybody laughed then maroon asked "what happened here?"then zim says the talllest forced me to hump tak and maroon laughs at tak then she kicks him in the nuts and he goes like evil little irken brat! everyone laughed but him: thats all i got hope u like add it if u like
tak lover chapter 24 . 6/10/2011
its called voot runner not voot cruiser dang u idoits
tak lover chapter 25 . 6/9/2011
i have an idea for the next chapter on the chapter 1 reviews
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