Reviews for Invader Zim: Tak Returns And Some Lies To Be Told
tak lover chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
i have an idea for the next chapter here it is: Tak calms down then she sees she was humped because she has the felling she was fingered but with a big finger then she goes nuts and screams "Who humped me?" then Lyn,Dib,and the tallest say "ZIM DID IT!" then she yells at him and he runs to his room and hides 1 hour later he comes out and goes downstairs Tak has calmed down then Zim says"Tak I'm sorry but your dad told me to hump you". Then she says,"shut up Zim I,m stil mad about it." then Lyn says"Tak Zim is telling the truth."the Tak says"I'm sorry Zim I just didn't wont to be a mom but that might happen says,"im sorry honey i just didn't have a choice." then Dib comes back screams ha ha ha you are scared of tak now ZIM!"Zim shouts,"Dib go away or ill kill you and then eat your organs like their waffles!"then Dib runs away i want to keep my organs!":thats all i got ad comedy if u want to by enjoy
Whitestar chapter 24 . 5/18/2011
poor Zim,... must be a couple of awkward moments for him in here... 030
whitestar chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
mid-evil dog... 030
Whitestar chapter 22 . 5/17/2011
Wait... the entry SAYS that Tak had the knife RAISED to the cop's throat, but it never said what happened to him... did he die? Did he lat go of Tak's arm and run off, screaming like a little girl? Or what?
WHITESTAR chapter 20 . 5/17/2011
Whitestar chapter 20 . 5/17/2011
in the last chapter, when Zim started humping Tak, i had a feeling something bad was gonna happn! 030'
Whitestar chapter 14 . 5/17/2011
"I KNEW IT!" Dib says randomly... funny! as! hell! im sittin here cryin and LMBFFAO! which means "laughing my big fat fucking ass off!" lol
whitestar chapter 5 . 5/17/2011
the last few chapters are just repeats... whats happening?
girisawesomeness chapter 25 . 3/28/2011
your serious! this was the best thing you could put together? plz add more...
girisawesomeness chapter 5 . 3/20/2011
hen i go to the next chapter its always the same... wtf is going on? can you plz, PLZ fix it?
IAMzim29 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
in one paragraph it says that zim accidentaly kissed tak but i am tring to figure out were it says that. man this story doesn't make any irken sence!
IAMzim29 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
dude or dudet which ever, it's called a VOOT cruiser not a FLIGHT cruiser (dumb *beep* !)
margie chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
it's a fan-fiction, so you can do whatever you want! don't worry about ppl telling you that something can't happen some parts i got a little lost cuz the dialouge was kinda bunched, but other than that, it was golden. I also laughed at least four times. that does not happen often with me. also, dropping the f bomb isn't exactly K. lol
123456789101121314151617181920 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
wow, your story is worse than mine...
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Wow this is a long story I could barely read the first page!
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