Reviews for Invader Zim: Tak Returns And Some Lies To Be Told
Whitestar chapter 24 . 5/18/2011
poor Zim,... must be a couple of awkward moments for him in here... 030
whitestar chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
mid-evil dog... 030
Whitestar chapter 22 . 5/17/2011
Wait... the entry SAYS that Tak had the knife RAISED to the cop's throat, but it never said what happened to him... did he die? Did he lat go of Tak's arm and run off, screaming like a little girl? Or what?
WHITESTAR chapter 20 . 5/17/2011
Whitestar chapter 20 . 5/17/2011
in the last chapter, when Zim started humping Tak, i had a feeling something bad was gonna happn! 030'
Whitestar chapter 14 . 5/17/2011
"I KNEW IT!" Dib says randomly... funny! as! hell! im sittin here cryin and LMBFFAO! which means "laughing my big fat fucking ass off!" lol
whitestar chapter 5 . 5/17/2011
the last few chapters are just repeats... whats happening?
girisawesomeness chapter 25 . 3/28/2011
your serious! this was the best thing you could put together? plz add more...
girisawesomeness chapter 5 . 3/20/2011
hen i go to the next chapter its always the same... wtf is going on? can you plz, PLZ fix it?
IAMzim29 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
in one paragraph it says that zim accidentaly kissed tak but i am tring to figure out were it says that. man this story doesn't make any irken sence!
IAMzim29 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
dude or dudet which ever, it's called a VOOT cruiser not a FLIGHT cruiser (dumb *beep* !)
margie chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
it's a fan-fiction, so you can do whatever you want! don't worry about ppl telling you that something can't happen some parts i got a little lost cuz the dialouge was kinda bunched, but other than that, it was golden. I also laughed at least four times. that does not happen often with me. also, dropping the f bomb isn't exactly K. lol
123456789101121314151617181920 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
wow, your story is worse than mine...
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Wow this is a long story I could barely read the first page!
shadow chapter 24 . 9/14/2010
ummm she starts beating up zim for doing uhh those stuff and the tallest shock him and then she use her implant to make everyone forget
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