Reviews for Invader Zim: Tak Returns And Some Lies To Be Told
Guest chapter 23 . 9/10/2010
uhh i meant how about tak use her implant or eye thing and everyone saw it and they all forgot about the murder or tak
shadow chapter 23 . 9/7/2010
how about you add that tim used her eye thing on the online and people saw it and everyone forgot everything about tak
Unknown D Flamerose chapter 6 . 9/5/2010
if you want people to make sure people recap on what s happening, then post a SMALL summery at the top. THEN contine your story. NOT REPOST THE WHOLE LAST CHAPTER!
Unknown D Flamerose chapter 5 . 9/5/2010
again, your spamming. you lost your readers and the whole plot of the story of your fanfiction..
Unknown D Flamerose chapter 4 . 9/5/2010
Your spamming the same chapter..
Unknown D Flamerose chapter 3 . 9/5/2010
You reposted the entire last chapter.. wth..?
Unknown D Flamerose chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Like the epic flow of this story, yet could you please not repeat the first part of the first chapter in the second? It seems you reposted the first chapter and it discourages your readers.

Reposting the whole first chapter with only added stuff at the bottom. Please don't do that. Just add the added stuff as a chapter. Much easier to read.
Ghost0fOnyx chapter 21 . 9/3/2010
good story some advice you may want to make a mention of those growth changes you mentioned earlier in story.
Ghost0fOnyx chapter 20 . 9/2/2010
I really want to hurt dib in this and are all cops molesters in this
Ghost0fOnyx chapter 18 . 9/1/2010
wow lot of t.v references in this chapter. ICarly lol
ngrey651 chapter 19 . 9/1/2010
Miss, if you keep doing this, I'm going to have to report your story. You know perfectly well by now that you can't keep repeating the same thing over and over.
Ghost0fOnyx chapter 17 . 9/1/2010
Great story so far
Shadow On The Full Moon chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
*TWITCH, TWITCH* UPDATE!
Ghost0fOnyx chapter 16 . 8/29/2010
I can't wait to see if zim finds the "cough" cum all over his bed. Nice story pretty funny
ngrey651 chapter 16 . 8/29/2010
Uh, no offense, but you can't just keep posting up the same chapter over and over. It's against the rules. Just have your very last and full chapter be the total story, or space everything out normally.
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