Reviews for Obscuram per Obscurios
Jennifer C chapter 1 . 2/6
As far as the general idea goes as in 'Hermione goes back to make sure she can save Snape', it is fairly good. But for her to berate Harry and Ron for not spending more time with the man who looked dead, not as realistic. She is smart, they are in a middle of a battle, they don't have any potions, the are not medics, and Madam Pomfrey is most likely too busy to go and check if a dead man is really dead, because people would die in her absence. And Harry does have that pesky Voldemort problem, if he doesn't deal with it, everyone will die. So Hermione's accusations sound highly illogical.
izzy5683 chapter 11 . 7/4/2020
great story loved it
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 11 . 5/16/2020
More! I want more!
Laura chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Rhyannath chapter 11 . 9/27/2014
Not bad. Just a bit blurry sometimes in the telling. Some things were not easy to follow, not enough transition sentences to show scene changes and the dialogue was formatted in such a way that I had to re-read most sentences to figure out who said what. And the use of brackets instead of parentheses was odd and distracting.
Megan Consoer chapter 11 . 9/4/2013
I really like this story a lot. Can you please write some more chapters?
CaptKJanewayOakenshield chapter 11 . 3/18/2013
Holy Hell! That was amazing. I love the way you honored Severus and all that he did and how you gave Hermione the strength of someone who had walked through hell, literally, but still maintained the innocence that was inherent in her. And the final chapter. I think I need a cold drink after that! Very very well done!
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 11 . 10/4/2012
Loved it!
T chapter 7 . 5/26/2012
You are a wonderful writer. I have read a lot of fan fiction, and although with most stories the plot is interesting, the writing leaves something to be desired, and I am, therefore, unable to be drawn in to the story. That is not the case with your writing. In the midst of these mundane stories, it's quite refreshing to read something that draws me in completely. Thank you.
SNAPE37 chapter 11 . 8/13/2011
wildchildwriter chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
Fantastic! U keep writing u have talent love this story wish this story wish it was longer.
Nijaded chapter 11 . 1/12/2011
Enjoyed this immensely, you wrote all the charachters just how they should be, particularly Severus. Great work.
KT8812 chapter 11 . 12/10/2010
An absolutely fabulous end... though I wish there could have been more...
KT8812 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
What a fabulous start to what I hope is a brilliant story!
SnakeCharmer2 chapter 11 . 10/10/2010
Ooh, Severus in charge *shivers* Great fic
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