|Reviews for Unwritten Armistice|
| RegalizdC chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
This was very cute to read. There aren't many fic focusing in these two and I'm very happy to see that there is one that is so well written. Thanks for sharing :)
| wobbuffet the third chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
*cheers* I loved this fic so much. It was /really/ well-written (to me, anyways), and I think you really nailed it. The characters, their personalities, reactions, relationships and how they changed, everything. I also liked how you didn't say outright how they were feeling, but showed it through their actions without explaining directly everything that's going on beneath what they say and do. The way Lan Fan and Mei grow a little closer/less hostile toward each other was intriguing. And of course, the way Mei is referred to as 'Chang' rather than by her first name was really smart; a good way to show how the kind of hostile relationship the two have.
It was just an epic fic in general. Keep writing! :)
| zealousfreak27 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Very nice characterizations. I love how subtle this is. They obviously came to terms, but as the title implies, it's unwritten. Very nice.
| Aurora-Borealis Coyote chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
This was so sweet. You have everyone in character, Ranfan especially, this is one of the most interesting fics I've seen about her since you examined her so well, especially at the end. Knox and May were really well done...and you've got to love Xiaomei :D
| AnastaciaKorean chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I loved this one-shot, because it had such deep meaning embedded into it.
And it's true, only under the doctor's house equality can be obtained.
Winry's parents treated the Ishbalans, treating them equally with Amestrians.
I also loved how Mei was IC for this.
| oakleaf chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I love these two characters even more after this cute little fic.
Thank you for a great story!
| Oh I wish I were a bird chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Aww, that was cute.
They were very much in character, too. Not many people write these two in character, so good job!
| ChipsPlease chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Wow, this is really well done! I love how you took this fairly small interaction between Lan Fan and Mei and stretched it out into something very believable and sweet to read. I thought you got their characterizations perfectly and it was really enjoyable! Terrific job!
| oosoutofservice chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
This is really quite adorable. I love the interaction between Lan Fan and Mei. The way you wrote them makes it seem very belivable as well. This is deffinatly my favorite fic of the day, actually, the week!