Reviews for Forbbiden Royalty
p17oyDONju9n chapter 17 . 1/29/2012
Now that's a OC character done right and I like Kaiya as a very well rounded character...She's sassy, a big tease but at the same time she has skeletons in the closet that makes her seem frail and venerable...

-I know the fighting scenes are the bane of your existence but geez luiz the final battle with the King was rather anti-climatic...for an action junkie like me that's like having withdrawals or something...lol...If you ever need to assemble a fighting scenario...I offer my humble services to you and write one for you...lol

-Too bad it ended and was way too short...Ichigo and Kaiya could have interacted more and you could have slowly develop their relationship...You could have easily made this story longer by involving Chad, Orihime, Rukia and the others...but I guess it ended satisfactorily...

-Good job and keep up the good work
FaithfulAizen chapter 17 . 7/29/2011
Loved it...will there be a sequal? For some reason I wanna cry...darn it I'm crying now *grabs tissue*
FaithfulAizen chapter 16 . 7/29/2011
I thought he was going to name the baby Kyrin
SlaveXBoyXlovelessXCrona chapter 11 . 3/13/2011
my god keep up the good work i love it
Narlth chapter 17 . 11/22/2010
Cute :D
Tiana Misoro chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
Awe! That was so cute Loved!
MugetsuIchigo chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
Yay! Wonderful chapter!
Black Cat Angel chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
Congratulation!-
cazcappy chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
nice ending i liked it...and no i don't like yaoi...yuck...sorry about the confusion
Narlth chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
Oo the king is strong.

Hmm doesn't it take alot long for a baby to be born?

ah I don't get where the name comes from :/
Black Sun Upon An Icy Sky chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
Okay, you actually have the guts to kill someone in your story off, I'm impressed...

And orange hair plus red eyes? HOT XD
MugetsuIchigo chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
Yay! Great chapter! Plz update asap!
ShadowGOUF chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
*clapping for ichigo and kaiya* heh heh you have no what trouble you two are in now. I wish the two the best of luck *smiles warmly at them* good job hollow.
Yin7 chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
yay the baby is here
Black Cat Angel chapter 16 . 11/11/2010
Aww, I wonderful ending. Can't wait for the next chapter!-
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