Reviews for A StudentTeacher Relationship
Flickerphile chapter 5 . 9/28/2010
I feel I must comment on some obvious elements. Your foreshadowing is a bit blunt. The setting is kind of a cliche. (But who am I to talk, I've written a story where Hermione and Snape get involved while Hermone is a student. Plus your title Student/Teacher relationships warns us of this fact.) I don't have much room to talk on that one. The plot is difficult to believe. That aside, I do enjoy the story and look forward to what you have for chapter 6. Good work.
nadaooooo chapter 4 . 9/6/2010
N'awww! I really want to be Hermione now... This was adorable!
E. Edwin chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
Very nice. :)
HermioneFan28 chapter 3 . 9/2/2010
WOW brillant story! please update soon and have more and more chapters! I hope this story isnt abandoned right?

PS for my review about chapter one: How it Began


ALSO: HPL: Occlumency:

Legilimency is the act of magically navigating through the many layers of a person's mind and correctly interpreting one's findings.

Occlumency is the act of magically closing one's mind against Legilimency. It can prevent a Legilimens from accessing one's thoughts and feelings!
HermioneFan28 chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
sorry to tell you this but you made a mistake here (Snape was skilled in the art of occlumency and that he read her mind though occlumency: see: She was so caught up in her thoughts of him that she forgot Snape was skilled in the art of occlumency. Hermione's body began shaking.

"Ms. Granger…." His voice was warm this time. He took a seat next to her in the other arm chair. He almost looked nervous. Like what he was about to do or say was going to be important or, break her heart into a million little pieces.

"… for me?" he finally spoke.

"Yes." She sighed. Her heart was racing.!) thats not right coz just so you know: occlumency: is when you are trying to hide your thoughts, its Legilimency: that is used to read peoples thoughs! okey? excellent story! keep up the brilliant work! thanks xxxx
RedRose102 chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
This is very sweet! Please Continue!
HermioneFan28 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
in what book is this set in and what year and how old is hermione in this story? is this the end of it or is there more and more chapters or a sequal to it? please write more to this excellent story! keep up the excellent work!