Reviews for Taking Advantage
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
sa chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Aww... that was so cute! I enjoyed that very much. :3 Nice story. But I'd like to point out that the comma goes inside the quote, not outside... and I think that's all, otherwise, this is very well-written.
theRegalBeagle chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Awesome story. And I thought the ending was perfect .
Sir Shirkin chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Awe x3 Well written 3
Rinhail chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Haha! So typical for these two.

Great story. I especially liked the last two sentences. 3
sarah83654123 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
My GOD. That is probably the best sex scene I have EVER witnessed :O Shame it's not carried on ;) 3
Animecartooncomicgirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
this was cool
BlackWingedAngel-Lucifer chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
haha this was great. if shuuichi could actually do this in the series or in the manga that would be crazy, id love to see that scene.
praedulcis chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
This was short and sweet, and I enjoyed it a lot. Nice job! :)
Lunadia chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Absolutly adorable, not to mention hot _ I luffles them!
too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
hahahaha thats rly good! :D

it was a little ooc but u already knew that~

but it was very good

ple write more~

BTW i wuv the ending ;)