Reviews for Solstice
Guest chapter 14 . 11/23
I think overall the was a good fan fiction there are some things I don’t agree with and that is on the underestimation of the characters powers. Jacob should not have been hurt at all by the bullet whole in wolf form and at the very least he and Nessie could have dodged. The Volturi should not have been able to arrive with a full team before the Cullens were able to prepare and gathers allies. Even if vampires could move at 100 miles per hour they still need to eat expanding that much energy constantly to cross the ocean is unrealistic that’s over 4,000 miles to cross the ocean. I don’t care how good a swimmer you are it’s going to take at least a week and they’ll need to feed on the way due to all the energy required. Also given their exquisite diet of human blood and they’d would fly rather than wast all that energy and have to eat what fish blood on the way.
SayerC455 chapter 28 . 12/28/2020
Wow absolutely enjoyed this, really need more.
Cheuk Lap Edgar LAU chapter 2 . 11/2/2020
Revell12 chapter 28 . 9/1/2020
I have never read fan fiction before but this was fantastic! Best weekend in ages reading this. Would love to see a follow up if you are still writing! Thanks
Guest chapter 28 . 6/7/2020
Please continue the story
beapleites chapter 28 . 3/3/2019
I'm sorry this is my first review. Your story is so god I can't believe it's unfinished, but I know life happens. Thank you for sharing this with us. Wherever you are now... thank you!
Shona Maguire chapter 28 . 12/23/2017
Fabulous spin off, I loved what you did with the characters and story line. Seth was always the one most at ease with the vampires and introducing Tara added another character we would want to find out more about and care what happened to her.
Well done and I also hope that at some point you return to this story.
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 24 . 10/30/2017
Loved your book! Sorry to see that you have not posted anything new for awhile. Would love to see where you were taking Seth in this story! I will continue to follow in hopes that you will write some more. What Wonderful story lines.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
What a GREAT story. So sad that you have not updated. Will keep hoping for more updates. WONDERFUL job. Hope to see more.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
I cant believe this doesnt have more reviews. I come back to it again and again for real its a gift. Xxxx
Country Gal chapter 28 . 10/5/2016
Loved it it is defiantly in my top 5 favorites I loved how you kept nearly all of the old characters. Some of the fabric. that I have read doesn't keep almost any. Loved it!
michaelagrangermalfoy chapter 8 . 7/10/2016
LadyBlu Cullen chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
Omigod! So many plot holes! Alice can't see Renesmee's future at all. Alice sees humans because she was one. She sees vampires best because she is one. But can't see the shape-shifters or the hybrid because she's never been those. Also, Edward's motorcycle is silver, not black. And, Edward's CDs are arranged by year, then by his personal favourites within that frame - not alphabetically. Sheesh! Have you not read the books at all?
Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2016
Liked it but Seth and Leah turned in to wolfs after there dad died
Katie chapter 2 . 4/24/2016
This is the best fan fictive ever read - please continue. :(
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