Reviews for Toilet Trouble 2
dark-phoenix-loves-kai chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
i swear i ROFL, LMAO and LOL-ed for like 20 minutes. XDXDXDXD

funny and pointless. i eyeballs were like O.O
Inyoface chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
This was so funny, the pot smokers, kai calling bryan in desperation, the poop being stuck between his cheeks!



Oh man, this little fic made my day.
Beywriter chapter 1 . 10/14/2010


That was totally random.

Ray and Lee pot smokers? Hahaha, thats a funny one.

Bryan a pooping coach eh? sounds like a good career plan.

chocolatexloverx16 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Hey :)

I know I'm just asking for trouble by reading this one, aren't i? xD Toilet Trouble at it's finest i'm sure lol.

TT2, i meant. The sequel :P

[Simply put, public toilets were the perfect place to direct a B-grade porn movie. He shuddered visibly.] So did i... o.o

I have yet to see 'Haunting in Connecticut' lol. Strange that it's the indirect cause of this future mess that's likely to be there o.o; That didn't sound very good haha.

[Trying to help Kai was like talking to the butt of a cow-useless.] Hahahahahahahahaha xD My favorite line lol.

Eep, Kai's getting flabby? The world must be ending lol.

Bryan's like Kai's mother hahahaha ["Alright, you wait out here"] xD

[He bolted for the toilet pushing an old man out of his way. The man fell over, but Kai didn't stop. He needed to sit his ass down on the toilet seat immediately!] HAHAHAHAHAHAHA ok, new favorite line. Poor old man. Haha.

["Here man, have some pot," said a voice which sounded oddly like Lee.] I SHOULD'VE KNOWN LEE WAS LIKE THAT! xD

{"Cool man, pot smoking party in the toilets woo," cheered another.] REI! Wow hahahahahahahahaha xD He said woo at the end lol. Was it like "woo" or like "WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"? :3

[The pot smokers were alarmed. "I think someone is trying to shit," Lee said. "Let's get out, before he stinks up the whole place."] HAHAHAHAHAHA wow xD That's awesome lol.

[Grunting like a beast always worked. It gave him strength.] Lol i bet it was his strategy in blading.

Ok, i take back my other statements, my favorite line of all time is... ["That is pathetic; no wonder your shit is stuck up your ass. Try again."] Well, yeah HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA rofl xD

["OH GOD!" he shouted, throwing his head back doing some kind of demonic scream much like a death metal vocalist.] BAHAHA nice!

["Thanks Bryan! You should become a pooping coach," said Kai, pulling up his undergarments and pants.] Need i point out your genius-ness? Hahahaha. Bryan should become a coach for this. He's a professional pooper XD xD hahahahaha lol.

I knew reading this would scar me in some way or another, but i read it for you :D

CryMeOut chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
haha! LMFAO! this made me laugh so so SO much!
LoTuSfIReSwOrD chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
oooh! poor kai! :( that sounded like a spinal tap to me. ouch. and rei smoking pot? I guess you really can't judge a book by it's cover.
suck my fanfiction chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
so so so so funny!

iu was trying to be quiet because i was int eh middel of class but i coulnt stop loling XD

(sorry for my bad englsih!)
Ms. Controversy chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO x 100! Oh man, omg, I could NOT stop laughing! The crap did not obey LOL! I think I'm gonna go read it all over again hahahahaha!
black angel falling chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
LOL oh god that was a brill read! you, know, you're the first person i've reviewed in like, half a year or something, congratulations! lol so many people can relate to this story lol! poor kai
Pixxy.Dust chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Bryan is a genius.

and for some strange reason I LOL'd SO HARD at the image of Lee and Ray smoking pot xDDD
MagnetaNightfall chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
LOL! Hahaha, this is awesome! Bryan? A pooping coach? Hahahahahaha! I would love to see that happen!

Poor Kai; the crap just didn't want to leave his ass. Good job Bryan was there to save the day :D Lol, lol, lol. I have no idea what to say so...yeah...I'll keep an eye out for the guide story...great job on this though. It's kick started me into writing my Anger story. Laters XD