|Reviews for Breaking an Obsession|
| DianaChaseKirkland chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
That was so damn cute :)
| Kitty Harasser chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This was great! Loved the second person POV and the writing and why does Oz reading Lord of the Flies make me laugh? Nah, he'd probably get a kick out of it.
So it wasn't graphic smut. I think skimming over the sex a bit was the right way to go for this nice piece of introspection.
| Lusky chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Ahhh this is lovely. It's great to see this pairing, and depicted as hetero, too! That's always a nice change. I also like the tense and point of view you wrote this in. Although it's not very specific to the actual characters, I like how personal the constant 'you' and 'her' is.
My only complaint is that the smut seemed to be cut short. Did you write more between the last two paragraphs and cut them to comply with the site's rules? It's not your fault if you had to, of course, but I felt it was a little abrupt is all. Thanks for an otherwise great read, though!